|Reviews for The Man with the Green Eyes|
| BrodieBlue chapter 15 . 3/16
Wow I didn't see that ending coming but I should have seen it. It's been staring us in the face the whole time! Everything that happened in this chapter was so horribly relatable, but that's good. I really like the realistic feel of this story. How could you skip all the smut though?! Me and you are going to have words about this! :p
| MissScarletInTheLibrary chapter 15 . 3/16
I'm very excited about this Dave development. It's been staring us in the face the entire time, how did I not see it coming? Perfect, perfect, perfect. They get on so well together, he's been there for her through the entire process, and I bet they have great chemistry.
Jon should be worried. Dave is the one bed buddy who could seriously lure Lana away from their arrangement. Jon continued with his non-committal tendencies in this chapter, and I know she says that she's fine with that, but is she really? Neither of them are developing even the slightest feelings for the other? This Dave angle seems like it'll blow the whole thing wide open, and things are about to get raw. Yay!
| ThatGirl54 chapter 15 . 3/16
Oh! Dave?! Oh... Well how will this go down? Will she laugh or take his offer seriously? Easy for Jon but difficult or her... Or maybe Jon just doesn't want her with other guys! That's what I think.. Fantastic chapter once again! Loved to see this update sitting in my inbox! :)
| Leyshla Gisel chapter 15 . 3/15
Yay! Welcome back! But holy shit, I think that's a good idea! Dave is chill and laid back. Plus they work together, and he knows her too well so he's the perfect candidate for many one night stands. :)
| angelsdee327 chapter 15 . 3/15
I knew it! I knew it would be Dave! *does the Snoopy dance* I pounced when I saw the update, babe! I missed this! And the convo between her and Seth on the phone was priceless! Jon...that cad.
| CheekyClaudine chapter 15 . 3/15
Omggggggg shit just got real!
| xxDream-Up-Your-Painxx chapter 15 . 3/15
Oh... That's not good.
So, does he want to just have sex with her, or does he want to bring feeling in this and start a real relationship. Hopefully it's former, but I think it will still be awkward either way.
Honestly, I expected Dave to get tied up in this somehow. I don't know exactly why; I guess I just had a hunch.
Even though I didn't have to wait too long, since I just finished reading the chapters before this the other day, I'm sure this chapter was worth the wait for other people. Amazing job!
| xxDream-Up-Your-Painxx chapter 14 . 3/13
So, I said that I was going to read this eventually when I had time... and I regret waiting this long.
The smut in this is just... wow. I absolutely love how graphic each and everyone of them are. Most of the people I've come across on this website don't like it, but I guess that's their opinion.
Also, I love the squishy moments they share with each other. I love how it's just the right amount of squishy, because I think I'm guilty of doing things like that sometimes.
All in all, great story. Slightly sad that it's on hiatus, but I'll wait patiently for the next chapter to come.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/12
Words can't describe how much I love this story. It breaks my little heart in two to see it on hiatus!
But I just felt the need to drop by and send some love for this amazing story!
| Nova-Lynn chapter 14 . 3/6
I really like this story ! i hope you update soon!
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/10
Really well written story. Its funny, quirky and totally sexy! Jon is awesome. I hope you can get inspired to continue this story or even write another. You have a really great writing style, even when your not writing smut, and I think you could write a hilarious, enjoyable story.
| MyPenwaits chapter 14 . 2/1
One Word: Delicious. Two Words: Naughty and Hot! Three Words: Wonderfully well written.
I myself am an admirer of "Dean Ambrose." Alas, we fans only have a few snippets or glimpses of the man behind Ambrose, but, I can express that you've intuitively captured his "voice."
Kudos, dear Writer!
| Mikki19 chapter 14 . 1/27
Oooft! Angry, horny Jon is the kind that I can get on board with ;)
I was kinda upset myself about the chain though :'(
Loved this chapter!
| Mikki19 chapter 13 . 1/27
Jon acting as a gay best friend...
BEST MOMENT EVER!
Seriously can't stop picturing that now lol
Can't wait to see what happens next ;)
| Mikki19 chapter 12 . 1/27
Oh, give me a second!
*Picks self off floor before collapsing right back down*
Holy shit! That made me laugh so hard! Jeez, I love it! :)