Reviews for Broken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TheBlackLord: I love what your review had done to the author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It does make me a little sad with nico cause I like his character normally but it’s how it’s gotta be considering the backstory |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a big fan of torture scene stuff but it fit with how you have the character and you didn’t go into unnecessary detail which for me at least would have made it not as good so all in all good job I’m enjoying your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a big fan of torture scene stuff but it fit with how you have the character and you didn’t go into unnecessary detail which for me at least would have made it not as good so over all good job I’m enjoying your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really? All the names you could have picked. It’s funny, I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() too much angst that it got to the flow of the story really! |
![]() ![]() Very nice |
![]() ![]() I am so sad! Please come back! |
![]() ![]() This is quite a shitty story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story would be 100x times better if Percy didn’t care for Annabeth any more. I like the idea behind the story but the fact that despite Annabeth being one of the people to send Percy to hell he still cares for her? That is absolutely pathetic and makes zero sense to me. She betrayed him and broke his loyalty yet he still cares for her? You made Percy into a doormat character who lets everybody walk all over him yet still cares for them because of his loyalty which some people may be okay with, but I am not one of them. Peace out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have yet to update my name but im cube I have to say, this story has been a blast for me to read and I can't wait for the next chapter. they storyline, pairings, everything is unique and I really enjoy reading this. Now, I must say PLEASE HURRY UP WITH UDPATES IM DYINGGGGGGGGGG (in no shape or form does this mean stress yourself updating, I know we all have personal stuff so take your time) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh everyone just be bullying Percy |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG thats why grover went to elisium that makes sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() You see why I don't like Annabeth? She yeeted him into hell and now shes like "bruh frick piper it should be me" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly think PercyxPiper is better than Percabeth, I don't really like Annabeth cuz of her hubris |