Reviews for Legacy Undone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am absolutely so confused how this is even still a plotline if the Uchiha haven’t had anyone with a sharingan since Madara….? Like that was the ENTIRE REASON THEIR CLAN WAS SUSPECTED…. Because they thought a sharingan was used to control the kyuubi….. If no one except Madara ever activated it in recent times… Then why is there somehow still a coup being planned….? I AM SO CONFUSED. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro, what?! How tf would they have more Jonin then Genin?! You’re telling me they have like twice as many elite ninjas as they do like entry level weaker ninjas?! That makes no sense whatsoever. I could understand Chunin having the most numbers, but having more elite ninja’s than just like basic grunt fodder level ninjas….? Makes absolutely no sense. Especially considering you would have to survive through being a Genin and being a Chunin to become a Jonin. Which means that like realistically half of the people who have the potential to be a Jonin would die before they get there. And some more of them wouldn’t put in enough effort to actually become a Jonin and should still just be Chunin. And then what about anbu? Are you saying anbu aren’t elites? Because you’re mentioning how the hunter nin are like the best of the best and the anbu doesn’t even get like an honourable mention or a shoutout? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a great story with a beautiful ending 3 i thought the end was gonna be abrupt or something but it was done very well and everything was handled perfectly |
![]() ![]() ![]() why make every cool person a girl, there are too many girls in this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont like this flipping roles only done fore the sake of flipping |
![]() ![]() ![]() oo i forgot about this story's paperwork jokes loooooooooollllll XDDDDD |
![]() ![]() GOAT Naruto fanfic. No debate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a gem thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, the shape of this is so different as to not be interesting to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() akane has son goku oh boy naruto and itachi left huh saw that coming wonder who else went with. uzumaki genes and son goku red fur shine in akane kurotsuchi has a crush on naruto and is tsundere in regards to him oro getting old |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto you fool you have family tsunade dan shizune oro are your family dobe . naruto you just changed things big time and saved a lot of lives and now tobi has han... oh boy not good itachi or some uchiha are going to be kuro tutors that or kuro going to be naruto neighbour |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh poor roshi naruto really will hate oro now i think if no sharingan exist or none publicly why is danzo bandaged? if oro is on the side of good danzo wouldn't be bandaged only reason he was ,was to cover the first hokage growing out his arm and his sharingan collection |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is naruto got levity and humor during a fight in the first place? why is he relying on what he knows in the future to coast by he didnt take it serioudly and his friends suffered... quit playing around naruto and act serious your not the tank jutsu spawning beast your a kid a strong somewhat powerful kid but a kid who doesn't have his fox pal on hand. no zabby you just fall for a demon wind shuriken instead granted you had water prison in play so yeah.. naruto it was a life or death situation your sensei stopped it from been one. so naruto really miscalculated him in stone would do ... he banked on what onoki he knew would do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() mei? mei is mizukage early? so what happened to the third tails jincuriki? well there goes naruto hope of peace with stone...either oro dies or onoki son does... |
![]() ![]() ![]() so he bias even though this isnt his time? why? he doesnt know theses version but he bias? what happens when he meets an ally and their a dick or evil? wouldn't he still have his large uzumaki reserves? and somewhat of a healing factor? also no kuruma wouldn't that mean his uzumaki genes would manifest in something senor healing charka chains? wouldn't itachi be placed on that list of need to kill ? ditto nagato and konan and sasuke? the rasengan he can explain it his father damn jutsu and tsunade drinks...solved or he looked it up thought it was cool and did it[ he does know the rasengan was his old mans jutsu not jiraiyas right?]who taught minato in this world if jiraiya died facing danzo before he became a sanin? hmm will he be happy to see han and roshi? what will onoki reaction be when the yellow flashes spawn is buddy buddy with his ACE's? |