|Reviews for Identity|
| starryeyedwr1ter chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Wow. This was really great. Particularly loved the opening: 'He' s the actor. He puts on his costume and recites his lines'.
I also like what you said about his friends being his downfall.
My only criticism would be the length of this as it is very short. Maybe you could intersperse these paragraphs with live action examples of him being the actor, friend, hero, etc. Just a thought.
Really great job though. :)
| Catching Fireflies chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Though this was rather short, it was amazing! It captured Dally perfectly, especially towards the ending. It describes a lot of his characteristics well.
Great job! :)