Reviews for Madara's Grandson: Justice League |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why the is there Star Wars? |
![]() ![]() ![]() SERIOUSLY you didn't say anything about star wars in this |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a rather stupid mask, it only covers 1/4 of your face, and with Naruto's that bad, sure he has transformation jutsu, but still... I think a mask like Nihilus or Revan from Star Wars or Zero from Code Geass, a Power Ranger Helmet etc. would have been better. Oh, and when I started reading this, I had to double check that this was a Naruto x not a Naruto x SW fic, lol! Perhaps a triple crossover... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Despite the grammar errors throughout your story I must commend you on this fine piece of literature well done and please update soon |
![]() ![]() Lol God please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() this sucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() come... I tried editing but accidentally click the post arrow anyways cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() This shit is just mid and this MC does things an insecure 14 years old do like im assume thr author was 14 when this cone out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nevermind, you really are just an idiot. And a liar, if that AN about having a beta is anything to go by. No way this was betad lmao Idiot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking foward to Chapter 9. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic. Naruto is so shrewd. And the part where he gave the price of his services I was like haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gran historia, deberÃas continuarla. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad this is discontinue.. Its a very good and interesting story |
![]() ![]() CHAPTER 9 WHERE IS IT |