Reviews for Eye of the Hurricane |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty much anything and everything lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I honestly did not see that coming. Also I'm a guy. And I started to dislike the Percy gets betrayed and swears to Chaos/Aether/Other Primordial etc. after finding so many that had a similar line, that's not to say all of them are bad cause there where a few that were incredible its just after finding so many I got really tired of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing Mr. Vorgel is either Chronos the primordial not Kronos the titan, or Chaos which would fit with the being bored and causing "chaos" and that's if he's Greek which he should I think since there was the inherited insanity line. He could also be the author of this story which would also fit in a weird way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAit is Rhea Neptunes daughter?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It depends cause they are so different but usually if the initial idea is good the I'll give it a chance and it turns out ok but yeah it varies and becomes difficult to distinguish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kinda thinking Cronus? Like the primordial of time? Idk, I think it's time related (her always being early or late, her unconcious period being more seconds, etc.) and I know it's not Kronus the Titan, 'cause he's in the pit and is nowhere near powerful e ough to stretch across the dimensions. Also, I like that it's not the fates. Everyone always defaults toThe Fates control the world and can change people live/fates, blah blah blah." I always enjoy a good twist in an unoriginal idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Originality. I do understand that it's hard to find a completely original promt, but I fo not want everything to be carbon copied from another fanfiction, or the books. I love what you done with this classic "reincarnation twin-fic" idea. Rhea has a good character, an interesting back story, and the right level of maturity for someone her "age." Also, I really like how you took Poseidon's power and portioned it out. Most siblings in Riordan's world has different aspects of one Gods power, ie Nico and Hazel having Death and Wealth. I love how you separated it into Calm and Storm in a way that doesn't skew the balance of power between certain characters. I also love that Rhea hasn't immediately mastered her powers, but still put in some effort in controlling herself. I love the bit of foreshadowing you've got that you masterfully implied without adding too much of a veer from the point of the story. In short, I really appreciate your writing and will read basically anything you put out lol. Sorry, rant, slightly manic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nico, but also Leo. I don't know why. Like, sad boys? Lol. I like Nico because I just wanna give him a hug and a happy meal, I guess. Leo, because I relate to him in the sense that he tries to make other people feel better no matter what's going on his life and he doesn't always succeed. Also, he's super smart but super subtle about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh. or some reasons I thought it would be Ouranos... Great story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps some time god? Chronos? Kronos? Or even Chaos? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehehe rhea and aeon pleade eagerly waiting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you ever come back to this masterpiece...because it is a masterpiece; I'd love to see Rhea with a female love interest? Possibly fem!Luke or zoe nightshade? This is truly a boon to this fandom. I don't think i've read a main character written with the nuanced weird/awesomeness that Rhea is. When Chronos says she's unique, I believe it because she's not the run of the mill protagonist 90% of authors write. She is special. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a really funny story. hoping for an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update pls |