I kind of checked this out because I was very bored butI'm glad I did.

The setting in intrigueing adn rhea sounds like an intersting character. I hope you don't fall into the pitfall of making her a mary sue, it would be a shame.

I loved how you described the interaction between poseidon and sally, it was kinda heartbreaking to hear his confessions and not have her believe him.

You might want to change your short summary though, while it's funny when you read it in the chapter itself it's not very appealing and doesn't invite you to read your story. Which would be a shame.

looking forward to more, Arithra

Interesting, very interesting. I'd gladly volunteer to beta read this because the story is that good. It's definitely something different and seeing things from a new perspective really changes up the story. Anyway hope you continue this because it really is a good story.

Holy butts. I LOVE your story! Oh my gods! It's fantastic! So, please, please, please, please, please post the next chapter soon. I beg you, please?

This story is the very definition of AWESOME! I really want more!