|Reviews for Perseus Primordial of the seas and oceans|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2
You don't know how to speak English, the plot is good but bad grammar ruins it.
| Faultypercy12 chapter 6 . 12/29/2016
Alexander is your real name author
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
Do you speak English? Maybe you should try to study more, because while this is starting out beautifully, I couldn't understand some sentences and what you were trying to say.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/12/2016
Hello I love the story so far. My name is Alex Ward and I would like to help with a guy character! Hope my actual name Alex is ok, age 17-19, my godly parent would be Posiden I LOVE the water! Male obviously haha. My preferred weapon would be 2 swords. A bit of personality well playful and sarcastic almost always smiling I think very much like a seaweed head we all know I act before I think but I also have a temper you do not want to experience and maybe a dark past and I smile to cover it up maybe and yes loyalty! And for skills I would like skill with the duel swords and daggers with amazing senses and reflexes and speed. Would LOVE to be in this story as a good demigod who maybe Percy takes under his wing maybe gives extra training to since I will be his half brother
| magic chapter 13 . 4/6/2015
Hey is Mike a traitor?
| Atrialname chapter 6 . 3/22/2015
This story is really good, but it is a bit bland, and the punctuation and spelling need some work.
| The fleeting wanderer chapter 8 . 2/24/2015
I really love this story. Keep writing
DID YOU KNOW: that changing shape and animal form is a power of the sea
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
This is a horrible thing, that's right this isn't even worthy of being called a story so I'm not bothering to sign in
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/23/2014
Jake dane 15 son of the sea god and artmis legacy of ares two scythes
| TheLazyDarklord chapter 13 . 12/20/2014
| bring the money chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
I already hate this because of it being percabeth after Annabeth cheats on him... GOD AWFUL.
| Hikari Nova chapter 3 . 9/12/2014
as i said in the 1st chapter please work on your grammar as you are leaving out words or using the wrong words or word tenses at times
| Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
please work on your grammar as you've left out words and used wrong word tenses
| allen r chapter 13 . 3/5/2014
| anthane chapter 5 . 2/27/2014