|Reviews for Chasing Goldilocks|
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 10 . 2/9
I love this chapter :) I do hope you'll return to this story sometime soon?
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 9 . 2/9
I love seeing Will try to take care of the whole team in the aftermath of Genoa :)
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 8 . 2/9
Wow ... I wasn't expecting Will's reference to the voicemail to have such a volatile effect on Mac, and to result in such an argument (but I think you do a great job of explaining why she reacts the way she does). And I think Will's explanation about why he can't repeat it yet is probably the best that I've seen. :)
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 7 . 2/9
I'm glad Mac reacted so strongly to the suggestion that she wanted to get out of their weekend. Sometimes it seems like moments like that get through to Will better than words.
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 6 . 2/9
Love the whole discussion of consequences throughout this chapter ... I like especially like delving into the ways that being in the Middle East changed Mac.
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 5 . 2/9
It's too bad that it happened this way, but at least they're still able to talk to each other okay afterwards. I get ho hard it must be for Mac, but this is the closest they've been in years!
| lilacmermaid33 chapter 4 . 2/9
Lovely chapter! I really like to see them communicating better, even though they're both being a little tentative with each others' feelings.
| millie.zhang chapter 10 . 12/21/2013
where have you been?
*crying for updates*
| Waoopal chapter 10 . 12/21/2013
where are u …
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/14/2013
never stop waiting
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/11/2013
Would love to see this continued! I agree with the other commenter... Mackenzie needs to stop punishing herself.
| Waoopal chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Can't wait for more！！！
| Waoopal chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Sign up for uuuuuuu:-*
| millie-zhang-scu chapter 10 . 12/7/2013
This is so great
The conversation is awesome and I am so happy he ended up in her place
| Tripple-A-Plus chapter 10 . 12/6/2013
Wow! It's amazing. Can I hope that Will got sick & Mac has to take care of him? That would be awesome. Thank you for this wonderful chapter. Love it.