Reviews for Bleeding Heart
Brazilwolf chapter 7 . 6/16
I really like the kids and they seem funny as well as Anko and Madako. I would like Anko better if she was more nicer and actually listened to what Naruto says. The kids were so cute and they seem to like Naruto a lot as well. Maybe though you can make them look to him more deeply like a father and leader. Just my opinion. Well anyway I really like the story and can't wait to see what happens next
asdfghkjl chapter 2 . 2/23
have you thought about giving him VI952's powers from Darker Than Black as well?
J.D.Harris chapter 4 . 2/13
this is looking to be a bit like a naruto and deadman wonderland xover.
PugTheMagician chapter 7 . 2/8
what i'm liking so far in this story is aside from the start and the fact that naruto even has a sister this is completely different from frozen heart. i'm not saying i don't like that story just that i apreciate that you don't keep using the same structure for every story. i wonder about naruto, are you gonna give him a severe silver allergy? because i'm loving the vampire theme going with him at the moment. i like that you had naruto have a "feeding frenzy" after not drinking human blood for a couple days, that could be a major problem in the future, especially if danzo got his hands on any of the children naruto just found. i wouldn't put it past him to simply starve a child of human blood for a while then release them in the middle of another village. i like that in the missions with team 8 you are showing a more stealthy ninja like approach to missions with them going undercover and doing research rather than simply pointing at a person and saying "he's bad, fuck him up". the little teasing between anko and naruto was fun to watch, especially the fact that she thinks his bloodline is actually kinky. i also like the way you had naruto react to being anko's boyfriend, seems realistic considering how little confidence he had on ever being with someone and then meeting some crazy chick with an exhibitionist and blood fetish that decided for him he belonged to her. i think the different jutsu naruto made are very interesting, and i love the idea of the blood imps. i just keep imagining during the sand-sound invasion a small army of tiny flying near on indestructible imps rolling over the enemy ninja, creating more with the blood of each fallen ninja resulting in enough imps to fill the stadium. i reeeeeeally think you should give them tiny pitchforks just to complete the image. i also think it very good that you created the shuketsugan especially in regards to the medical stand point and also the new taijutsu style naruto is developing for it. i also think it cool that you had him have the bat clan and vampiric weapons, very nice. i also like madoka in all this, she seems spunky and i worry for konoha a little every time she and anko meet
bloodlinenaruto chapter 7 . 1/22
please update
candy4beth chapter 7 . 1/6
update soon please
Hades' Neko chapter 7 . 12/26/2014
Can't wait to read the next chapter. I also loved that ugly made naruto and anko the parents of the clones. CIAO XD
narmulti chapter 7 . 12/4/2014
UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON
Kylevalheru chapter 7 . 11/16/2014
Dude please update this fix it id amazeballs
Iori Kami no Onii-sama chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
Good story! Now... WOULD YOU PLEASE! CONTINUE IT!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/5/2014
5 seconds seems a bit quick for someone to drink 7 pints of blood.
246vili chapter 7 . 11/1/2014
Having 7 kids at the age of 12, now thats accomplishment :D Hopefully he won't have gray hair before turning 30.
246vili chapter 2 . 10/31/2014
Hm, bat summons. Quite fitting for him.
Btw, I see Sasuke is not a brooding little b*tch in this fic. Does that mean the Uchiha massacre didn't happen, or he just took it better than in canon (and countles other fanfics)?
246vili chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
With this kind of power and craving for blood Naruto and Gaara will be best friends in no time... or they will try to kill each other the minute they meet.
Wanderer No.96 chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY!
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