|Reviews for The Device Has Been Modified|
| Madadh Allaidh Joe chapter 2 . 7/31
I loved the ending. This was a very creative and fun story, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
| CrystalIce AngelBlossom chapter 2 . 6/14
One ...wat does ("If I were an assembly language, I'd jump to your address, shift right a bit, push it in, pop it out, load a byte into your accumulator, then jump if you're negative.") Mean? I'm RLLY frackin curious
Also GOD I LOVED THIS I LOVED THIS SO MUCH THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST 1-2HRS OF MY LIIIIFE (I'm not sure how long it took exactly to read)
OH GAWD AS HE ADVANCED I WAS JUS YES BABY YES
HE GABE HIMSELF A BOICE AND NEARLY KILLED KOZ
HES OKAY WITH KILLING IF ITS TO KEEP KOZ SAFE
HE WANTED TO LOCK KOZ UP IN A PADDED ROOM
COMIC FUCKING SANS I FUCKING LOVE COMIC FUCKING SANS AND IN GLITTERY BLUE IS GODDAMN HEAVEN!
HE MADE HIS OWN PICTURE
95% U EVIL CREATURE IVE BEEN SO WORRIED AS HE HELD ONTO THT THING A FUCKING MONTH LATER A MONTH!? AND THEN WHEN THEY ALMOST TOOK JACK OMG
AND HIS LOOOOG HE SACRIFICED HIS LOG 90 FUCKING 5 PERCENT
AND WHEN HE SAID ERROR I WAS DYING BUT WHEM HE CAME TO SO HAPPY BUT STILL DYING WAT WAS THE FIVE PERCENT!?
...and it was the fucking fonts xDDDDDDD YAYYYYYYY ID RATHER LOSE HIS BEAUTIFUL FONT THEN ANY PART OF HIS PERSONALITY!
furry nights and innuendos abound
I LOVE THIIIIS THANK U FOR IT ...if u ever decide to make Lil one shots for them I don't think anyone would complain
Even if not one shots them jus a list of ideas for them I'll make some tht I think would be cute
1. Jack learns abt the virgin killer sweater and bugs pitch
2. he forces koz to put on tht sailor chest one? (Where there's a huuuge ass oval over the chest) CUZ he thinks KOZ would be hot in it and he was but he got jelly at other ppl (who don't see him as a person CUZ assholes) and try to hit on his Boyfriend/Husband/ Human/ HIS KOZ and like jumps KOZ in front of them and makes out b4 looking like 'what bitch he's mine' ;3
3. jacks first times: (food?) / swimming & baths/Clothes/ styling hair/dying hair/ running like Bambi/ice cream/SNOOOOOOOOW/ Ice skating/lemon juice/animals/ fighting the sassy council fucks *coff sparring ...codec off according to them anyway**/ hot food/a pepper CUZ he's jack and he's curious/ making it a habit to befriend the most terrifying looking creatures in the galaxy and turn them in to wat amounts to little harmless seemimg terrifyimg baby bunnies kittens puppies turtles birds etc/ jack terrified to death of spiders millipedes needles wasps or hospitals -CUZ spiders even a pic are horrible too unnatural even tho he's befriended semi archnidiiiish looking rlcreatures but to spidery and its a big fucking nope- mill in centipedes are unnatural as well to many legs - ITS NEEDLES THEY PIERCE PPL AND HURT TO HELP THEM!? his scream he hates them especially in his kozzy
Wasps have no reason to illlive except cause pain
Must I explain hospita
Sick ppl ...death...KOzz
In one means injured badly
| Ruby of Raven chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
Ha! This was so awesome and just- AWESOME! XD
| PlaidOtaku chapter 2 . 10/15/2016
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING AND FANTASTIC AND FUNNY AND GREAT!
| Conan Shinichi Lover chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
What does the part where Jack says ("If I were an assembly language, I'd jump to your address, shift right a bit, push it in, pop it out, load a byte into your accumulator, then jump if you're negative.") mean? I'm just curious! Other than that, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
| AugustInk chapter 2 . 3/11/2016
OH MY GOD
OH MY GOD
THIS IS THE SINGLE GREAT BLACKICE/GOLDICE FIC I HAVE EVER READ, AND WILL PROBABLY EVER READ. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, YOUR PLOT AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT FOR JACK WAS FLAWLESS. I LOVE THE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN HIM AND KOZ! I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH
WHEN KOZ TRIED TO SAVE JACLS FILE AND ONLY GOT 95% I START FREAKING THE FRICK OUT
AND THE SCENE WHERE HE DOWNLOADS JACKS FILE WAS HEART WRENCHING. THIS IS SOO BEAUTIFUL, I WISH I COULD UNREAD IT SO I COULD EXPERIENCE IT ALL OVER AGAIN. THANK YOU SOO MUCH. SOOO MUCH FOR WRITING AND SHARING THIS.
THANK YOU SO MUCH.
| LilithDarkness chapter 2 . 11/22/2015
Gah cuteness XD
I love this couple. Even more so now. Amazing
| rowexz chapter 2 . 11/15/2015
Fuck yes XD
Thank you :) this was so amazing to read x
I love it, I love it, I love it
| xXxXxRoxasFanGirlxXxXx chapter 2 . 8/13/2015
I loved this story, actually all your stories but this peice was truly amazing. I loved the concept were jack was an AI ... A smart ass AI. The end having me bursting out laughing when he realized that 5% was his fonts... Awesome work
| abattles2 chapter 2 . 6/13/2015
I love this sooo much. This was touching, and sexual, and heartwrenchingly awesome. I waa going to be mad if the ending was sad, and jack was dead. But since he's not. You will have me rereading this story again and again and again for all time. This was perfect and beautiful and i cant wait to read it again!
| FlamePrinceOfHoardKingdom chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
This story was awesome! Please write more! I'd like to read more on the adventures of Jack and Kozmotis!
| NotSoNormalLady chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
This was really cute! It definitely hit my feels in all the right places. Had the right amount of silly and fluff. Thank you for writing this!
| Ravens Black Rose chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
Wow I loved this!
At first I wasn't even sure about reading it, after reading the description I didn't think it would be my kind of thing, but I gave it a go and am glad I did! The more I read the more I began to love it.
It would be nice to see an extra part showing there life after the end, after Jack gets his body, I wish there was more.
Really love it! x3
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2014
OMGZ! I love it so much I wanna cry!
| Cerekal chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
This was amazing and beautiful.
And I am just speechless.