Reviews for Kiss It All Better
JJJPK chapter 1 . 4/10
That was SO sweet and sad, though a little jumbled and confused. For the context that actually worked in your favor, though. Nice job, keep up the good work and happy writing!
Elenhin chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Very very sad my friend, very sad... but good. Back to back, I like that, and given what has happened it would not be childish. It's brothers... it is as it should be. :D

A good story... :D

Take care, Elenhin
FiliKiliForever chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
:,( (cries) why? So soooooo sad :( (sniffs) that was beautiful thanks for wrighting this :,) (continues crying)
ConstablePenhaleShootsHimself chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Very moving.
Oblivian03 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
That last line and the part directly before it broke my heart. :( For a first fan fiction, this is pretty good, and by pretty good I mean really really really good (if a bit short ;)
Mira Meliandra chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Goodness! For a first, this is AMAZING! Seriously!
Excuse me, I have to go curl up in a corner and die crying.
ProfessorHavoc chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
Ahem... I mean, very nice...
The Defender chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
...there is no way this is your FIRST. Guests aren't this amazing.

Oh...tears. Oh god. Tears. Beautifully done, is all I can say. Keep up the good work.