|Reviews for The White Reaper|
| Anniria chapter 4 . 5/22
I need more of this, I also need a codex for this to explain all the changes, how did the Seveners form are bio and virtual salarians the only ones or are there still normal salarians? What's with the widely accepted slavery in the Seveners was that mainly due to the Batarians or did some other species contribute to it? So many questions
| ayleid chapter 4 . 1/13
This is fascinating. The galaxy's benevolent overlords seem to have manipulated all these races into extremely strange alliances and then pitted them against each other to trigger an escalating arms race, is that it?
The new tech is interesting as well as the different societal changes (mildly horrifying, too). The balance in place seems very subtle. Honestly, I'd love it if you pursued this fic in particular.
| Culebra del Sol chapter 4 . 8/18/2014
Now this is a very intriguing concept. I was sold the moment you suggested a group of Reapers against their directive, but such a vastly different culture and alliance of the species?
I want a full out NOVEL from this.
| Tz342 chapter 4 . 8/12/2014
A very interesting and to my opinion original take on the Mass Effect verse I would like to read this intriguing story that such a unique setting, history and politics for Mass Effect story.
| Lord Sigfry chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
| Neodammarung chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
Most sinister...and I see you adopted my Sandblaster gun idea XD. Looking forward to more!
| A. M. Shawke chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
Well. I think that it's perfectly okay to assume that the 'regular' salarians are pretty rare at this point (considering we have Virtual and Bio salarians). Speaking of the BSs, I'm pretty sure that they compensate fully for the Seveners' use of slaves.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
PURE 40 k warhammer awesomeness
please keep this story going
| Hero of the Multiverse chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
Wait, so what's going on with Shepard's ship?
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
nice incorporation of the da stuff but while you clearly have this universe fleshed out in you head some codexs to explain it to us would be apreciated
| M-Angel 05 chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Great story! Enjoyed this chapter. Poor Liara though. ;(
| Kalisko chapter 3 . 6/1/2014
Okay, admittedly I didn't expect this story to go this route. It's interesting, and definitely raises a lot of questions on how the world was developed.
I admit I am bothered by the fact that slavery managed to survive here, but I've seen worse. If you do update this story, I'd read it.
| Hero of the Multiverse chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
This seems like it'll be an awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
| A. M. Shawke chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Well. That was... very, very different. I think it's pretty cool how you've remixed a good amount of the ME universe for this story. It would be interesting to see where this goes.
| Byakugan789 chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Well that was definitely interesting. Not entirely certain whether I approve or not, but you hardly need my say so. Regardless of my misgivings about the slave culture or the inclusion of the batarians as anything other than a punching bag I feel i might look forward to seeing this continue. Not nearly so much as enemy returned, but still.