Reviews for Apotheosis
nrunn30 chapter 15 . 7/11
I'm big on HEA and I guess this can be considered that...maybe? Possibly? No matter what it was amazing.
Paranormal.Babe chapter 1 . 5/23
I know this review is for Chapter 1, but I just completed your story, and I must say that I am head over heels! This reminded me of the Joker's and Harley Quinn's relationship, just with Loki and Jane.
You have such a talent for wording things in a way that doesn't get boring to read. Awesome, awesome use of synonyms and adjectives all throughout the story.
Be careful of repeating phrases too often; however, and of course small grammatical errors (but you'll find those throughout all of my stories as well).
Overall, this story is a 10 in my books. You softened Loki's character, without making him unbelievable. The romantic scenes were perfect. Not too lemony, but not boring by any means.
Nicely done!
Side Note: I loved reading your notes about it being hard to finish the story. It takes me FOREVER to finish my own. I can relate 100%, but you have a wonderful talent and I hope to continue to see it on FanFiction.

xoxo
cypris88 chapter 15 . 1/3
Ahhhh what an unexpected ending! Somehow I could totally see it though. She knew she was gon get into some crap w the Trickster God at her side. ;) lovely story!
cypris88 chapter 13 . 1/3
Amazing chapter! Blistering with raw emotion. Poor babies are all so lost, but I'm hopeful for the future! Jane's gotta try on the hunter-gatherer lifestyle for a bit first. :D
cypris88 chapter 12 . 1/3
Dang Loki that was a dick move pretending to leave her there! I would be just as pissed and confused as Jane. I loved the part where (paraphrasing) Loki is used to winning via his tricks but in this instance they both know he's about to lose.
cypris88 chapter 8 . 1/1
Fantastic chapter. I wonder if SHIELD can really protect Jane at all. And who the heck is Thor's enemy?
cypris88 chapter 6 . 1/1
OMG the slow burn of their relationship is like beautiful agony. Loved this chapter.
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 15 . 6/29/2016
I just have to tell you how throughly I enjoyed this story. It is the only Loki/Jane fic I've ever seen that made any sort of sense. I think you captured Loki very well, and I am loooove how you characterized Jane. It's a Phoenix story married to Tiger Bride. Excellent job. Love love love.
MaritimeBlue chapter 15 . 6/11/2016
I keep coming back and rereading this over and over again. It's so very good. I honestly don't have much to say, other than that. The characterization is so good. The phrasing and the pacing are so good. I do wonder what happened after the end? And if you're willing to answer that question, I'm all ears!
But anyway. Really, really good. Thank you for sharing.
MzMeloncholia chapter 15 . 4/18/2016
Wow. Just...wow.
Thank you for sharing this gift xxxx
RedDeathLvr chapter 7 . 4/8/2016
This story is amazing. I don't think I'll be able to put it down, so I'm sure I'll be up late tonight..lol.
rengisol chapter 15 . 2/3/2016
Fantastic story! You're an extremely talented writer! Thank you for finishing this fic. I loved the way you managed to pull my emotions across the board when writing all your characters. They were all so compelling. Keep up the great work!
callalily32 chapter 15 . 2/1/2016
I LOVE this last chapter! You've done such a great job pulling it all together. :) Thanks for this great, great story! I'm so glad you finished it and it was so wonderful to read!
ElectricLimeGreen chapter 15 . 12/16/2015
Poor Bruce! I was rooting for him and his broken heart.
Thanks for sharing your story - I really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/26/2015
This is an amazing story, you're really talented.
Would you be willing to write a Thor fan fiction with a Jane Foster/Bruce Banner (Hulk) pairing. I think they would make a lovely couple.
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