|Reviews for Icha Icha Paradise: The Jinchuuriki and the Sand Sibling|
| Jacob.Uzumaki chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
love it bro
| anime-death-angel chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
STONE COLD STEVE AUSTIN!
| ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
It looks like Gaara might his wish as far as Naruto becoming his brother in law. Hell, the blond knucklehead might go one step farther and make him an uncle if the amount of sperm he shot into Temari is any indication.
As usual DC316 your attention to detail as far as the love scenes go is second to none and best yet you manage to do this without spelling problems or any other kind of grammatical errors. The very fact you take your time and tell your story without just rushing headlong into the money shot only makes this tale of lust and thrust all the more better.
I've read a lot of fics featuring the blond duo of Naruto and Temari and by far this is one of the most intense as far as the chemistry goes between the two wind style ninja. It kind of reminded me of a fic entitled "Escort" where Naruto was charged with escorting Temari back to the Hidden Sand village only to find out he was set up by the Hokage to go on the mission so that Temari can confess her true feelings for the savior of the world. Apparently the story must've been a little to spicy for the people who run this site 'cause I've looked all over for it and can't seem to find hide or hair of it.
But I must say this more than makes up for the now missing in action story and as always you have my eternal thanks for yet another job well done. I'll definitely look forward to that proposed three way with Naruto, Tenten and Temari despite the fact that there's animosity between the wind goddess and the weapons mistress. Good luck to Naruto in trying to get those two to get along considering they both have anger issues that might give Sakura a run for a her money(not really but they come real close). Well goodbye for now and remember, don't eat the yellow snow(nyuk! nyuk! nyuk!). SV33 out.
| agarfinkel chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I'm guessing you got that phrase from Stonecold Steve Austin. I remember he said that line on "Celebrity Deathmatch": "And that's the bottom line...cause Stonecold said so"
| fictionelement777 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
this story is HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTT! Can't wait til thanksgiving!
| hugp1x chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
You say Temari is your favourite female in Naruto, yet you get her personality all wrong.
If you'd changed Temari's name with Ino or Anko, I'd not have noticed anything out of place other than the references to her family and village.
She's supposed to be stoic, aloof, dismissive and clever. Turning her into a typical sultry seductress - even if this is just a smutfest - is completely OOC. That's fine and all, as I already said, this is just smut, but if you change her character - which you claim you like - you're not actually writing about the Temari you so laud.
| Dakushna chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Don't leave us hanging, please
| outcastmike chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
I enjoyed this one shot that catch phrase is from stone cold Steve Austin
| Legionary Prime chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Not a bad one-shot. And I absolutely love this pairing.
Could you do a Naruto/yugito pairing next?
| Iron Reprieve chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Raptor does do great work, but so do you my friend. It's pretty evident here at least.
| kami-of-chaos chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I haven't read the whole story. But the Marriott? Seriously? I'm crying in laughter right now.
| rodz chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
| shadow wolf125767 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Love your story :) can't wait for more. Also the catchphrase is from stone cold steve austin
| Jeku Kusanagi chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
This is amazing story!
| ChaosMagemon chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
That was an awesome lemon with Temari, no disrespect to the ShikaTem fans, but I do like seeing her with Naruto better.