|Reviews for the twin that never saw life before hogworts|
| anon9826 chapter 4 . 7/28
Go back over all of the chapters and look at the spelling, punctuation and grammar. It's awful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
This story is really intriguing. I can't wait for the next update.
| mizzrazz72 chapter 8 . 7/4
Lucius should be the other person that Harry can go to.
| lilyflower101 chapter 8 . 7/3
I can see harry being a great Ravenclaw. :)
| lilyflower101 chapter 7 . 5/29
Love it! :)
| Lupinesence chapter 7 . 3/14
Good fic so far. The biggest issue so far is with the spelling, particularly with character names. As most of the names are unusual and will always turn red with the spellchecker, I would suggest going to the Harry Potter wiki and checking the spelling there. That way you could make a sort of glossary for yourself of all these names so all you have to do is copy and paste it in your story and not worry about it. Hope this helps :)
| ibterismith50 chapter 6 . 8/12/2014
Nice story so far. Only thing is you need to get a beta to check your spelling. Thanks
| Katzztar chapter 2 . 8/12/2014
I get why James doesn't like Harry, not famous as his brother, but why does James see Harry as a freak? I know its not the same reason as the Dursleys did, they called him freak because he had magic, which they saw as unnatural.
I tried to read this and to enjoy it but the mistakes are too much. This really needs to be checked bore posting...
Hogwarts- not hogworts
rap on the door- not rape on the door
hold up Lily - not holed up Lilye
Diagon Alley - not diagon ally
These are just a few.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
If it was just swearing and abuse you should have made it rated T
| emthereble chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
love the plot !
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
What would happen next time
| 917brat chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I really enjoy WBWL stories and would like to read more of yours.