|Reviews for General of the Pit|
| A Poke Jedi JL DT Son of H P chapter 22 . 10/12
i called it from chapter one: This book has been sadistic and beautiful. Please continue.
| A Poke Jedi JL DT Son of H P chapter 1 . 10/12
only read chapter one so far: DAMN, this is gonna be a great book!
| manas6626 chapter 22 . 9/22
Please update...BTW gr8 story... :)
| UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 13 . 8/24
Percy doesnt kill why did u make him kill ?! But other than that this is an awesome story keep up th good work
| veryspecialagentriley chapter 22 . 7/26
Awesome storyline. Please update soon
| Tom Holland is my life chapter 22 . 7/24
| Kindred Scarlet chapter 22 . 6/14
Mate no you can't do that this is a crime ! You need to update
| LonelyBoy614 chapter 15 . 5/23
Uhmm... Major plot hole. Percy took a bath in the Styx so Zoë sacrificed herself in vain...
| eding420 chapter 22 . 5/9
The best evil percy fic that ive read. UPDATE PLES
| JimmyHall24 chapter 1 . 5/3
Wait for a second... Triton? Artemis! You could do way better than that.
Plus doesn't Triton have fish tails? Where is his penis?
| MrsBennettFrazier chapter 22 . 3/27
NICO DI FUCKING ANGELO. WTMF PUTO HOW COULD YOU JUST MF DIE LIKE THAT ON ME YOU STUPID STUPID BOY, OMFL IMMA GO FUCKEN CRY NOW FOR THE LOSS OF MY EMO BABY GHOST KING
| HermitCap chapter 22 . 3/26
Oh my God. So I read one of your other fanfics and was amazed, but then I read this and I was literally blown away. Bless you, for this fabulous story!
| DaughterofWar03 chapter 22 . 12/16/2016
Amazing story and plotline! Absolutely loooooove the story! Would be even more amaze if you UPDATE though... *glares at you* so please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEEEAASSEEEE update!
| son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 17 . 12/4/2016
Chiron is a centaur. they are monsters and monsters don't dye remember
| son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 18 . 12/4/2016
wish didn't expect that one, GO ACHILLES!