Reviews for Daughter? This Should Be Interesting…
Jemloliocktoyz chapter 4 . 2/22
AAAAHHHHHH! YEEEES HE PROPOSED! AND SHE YES, duh why wouldn't she their dating. anyway he must kiss her like that everytime a ghost shows up. BUT SQEAL THEIR GETTING MARRIE! Dani flowergirl, Jazz maid of honor, Tucker bestman, Valerie bridesmaid, if this doesn't happen eh its ok. It'll be a great wedding
Valle95 chapter 14 . 11/17/2016
I am unsure of what happened between ch.12 and ch.13 but the quality in writing went from pretty good to abysmal. Sorry but it is the truth and really confused me, all I know is Danny is a teacher but of what i can't tell and who is in his class is not specified other then Lancer, Maddie, Dani, and Tucker.
vampirechick13 chapter 14 . 5/21/2016
I hope you do continue this story... But if you do please edit chapter 14 i have no clue what they are saying im only seeing i said sam said or dani
Lynse chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
This looks to be a good start. I would've thought Dani's explanation would be a bit more of a shock, even considering this is set after PP and that Jack and Maddie know Danny's secret. (I'm not sure that Dani was the only secret he kept. I kinda doubt they had an inkling of how far Vlad went, because that's *far*.) I think you could've taken a bit more time with the reactions than you did to flesh it all out, but that could just be my preference; I tend to drag things out too much.

You probably fix this in future chapters, but you've got the odd spelling/grammar mistake that another proof reading before posting might help you catch. (The computer would probably highlight some of them.) I'd also recommend, if you kept it up, not putting an author's note in the middle of the story. That's more my opinion than anything else, but I find it distracting. It jars me out of the story when I'd rather lose myself in it, and what you said here-that Dani wouldn't necessarily go into the details even if she knows them (though I imagine a secondary reason is that you don't know the details yourself. *grins*)-could have been easily noted at the end of the chapter.
dannyphantomrocks1 chapter 14 . 4/17/2015
It was a litter hard to read can you go back to the way you wrought chapter 12
shadowhitman chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
can you Updated the story plz.
DanDrake chapter 14 . 8/13/2014
I hope you are planning on continuing this, because i really like it!
StarlightNyx PhantomKnight chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
I like the story, the plot is fine but sometimes it's hard to know what is going on because it's seems to be out of order among other things, I hope I'm not being too rude and I also hope you take my review into consideration. Thanks, Starlight NyxKnight
jim89 chapter 14 . 4/3/2014
interesting take on teaching a class on ghosts, feels a bit random compared to last chapters
we went from Danielle to band practice to a wedding. Now a class
feels like organized chaos, a little but I'm assuming is leading to something greater

We shall see
Awesomenesss-sama chapter 14 . 4/3/2014
this story sucks, and I'm not reading anymore of it until it improves, which I know you can do, go a couple of chapters back, and you'll see that it's pretty good, but this is the second time in a row that you've published a crappy chapter
zoxy2 chapter 14 . 4/2/2014
Yeah I'd be silent too after watching that video :) good chapter!

-Zoxy
lili love chapter 13 . 4/1/2014
i hope you continue is one of my favorite stories
Emmazippy577 chapter 13 . 3/30/2014
I can understand the geist of it, and it's a super good chapter!
Awesomenesss-sama chapter 13 . 3/30/2014
just to let you know, this was a crappy chapter, did some kind of virus attack your computer?
zoxy2 chapter 13 . 3/29/2014
Yeah when I read thus u was Kinda confused, it was a but jumbled up too me. Although I am really excited for the next chapter ! :)

-Zoxy
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