|Reviews for Checking on Malfoy|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2017
Naaw more! Was the start of a good story!
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
Just wow. Wow as in wow. Wow as in that escalated quick. Wow as in it was good
| thegirlthathidesinhermind chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
This is so cute! I love daddy Draco!
| InkedBaby chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
There is nothing more adorable than single father Draco. I absolutely swear. It's perfect. I was SO surprised when the baby started crying, then I was like AWWHHH, because seriously, I just can't. I have a two year old, and seeing a daddy with his baby seriously just makes you fall in love even more.
Usually, I don't really search out stories with kids, its just not my thing for some reason, the only stories I really like with kids at all are Draco as a single father, I don't know why...
I've read a few stories where Draco had a little girl, one where she was at Hogwarts with him, and I swear, Draco with a baby girl is perfection, you should find it and read it. Maybe its in my favorites or something, I don't know. I just love it.
So back to my review! Love Narcissa, in this! So funny how she walks in on that and Is still perfectly formal. Love it.
And the book store idea is great! I've never read that before at all! I love the idea, especially a used book store in muggle London, its so random it just fits, you know? Its great.
So funny how Harry keeps getting distracted by Draco's butt, lol.
This is the only story I've read that I didn't wanna smack Ron.. I've always just had like a tolerance for him. Even in the books, honestly. I don't know why. Yes I do, actually. Because he gets mad and leaves. I always used to see memes of him and Harry that are like its not about who has been friends the longest, but who has been the most loyal, or stupid stuff, and I'm just like NO! No, no, no, no, no. He was not loyal, he let his hot head get in the way, and abandoned his friend out of jealousy, that is not loyal. I don't know, I've just never likes Ron. He was funny in this though, the only story I've liked him in, honestly.
If I didn't get annoyed when people pressured me to extend one shots I wasn't comfortable writing more to, I'd totally ask you to write more to this, lol!
| mnmnmnmnmn chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
how is it you write the best oneshots? this was fab! i loved it. xx
| vulpixfairy chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
A start of something deep and new? I like it and it's realistic on how it happened. I am intrigued by how you described their conversation and interaction with each other and the tenderness and snarkyness of the characters are well balanced. Well done!
| IchigoGalaxy chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Wow, this was great! It's nice to read something lighthearted about these two once in a while. I really enjoyed this.
| Phnxgirl chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
*pouty face* But... But... There could be so much more to this! I love it! So adorable!
I now know how it feels though to be asked that, as my first one shot has had many requests to be made into more of a story. Problem is, I didn't plan any further ideas for it, but now a couple are inching their way into my brain.
But perhaps maybe like me, you can just keep it complete but add something if the moment strikes? Haha