Reviews for Whirlpool Sky
Derich chapter 6 . 1/10/2019
Now this is a novel story idea. I loved the deconstruction of chakra techniques and all the thinking you did on that uchronism.
I doubt this story will be continued (judging by the last update date), but thanks for sharing these chapters :)
nrvnqsr chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
most of the changes could be explained with one change, hashirama didn't marry Mito
doubledamn chapter 3 . 10/12/2017
No mass Sealing knowledge, no chakra control/capacity training, are Summon Contracts even a thing in this world?
LillianBlake chapter 6 . 12/24/2016
Merry Christmas dear Author!
LillianBlake chapter 6 . 11/12/2016
Hi there! I really love your story and the potential it has, please continue it! Not many stories have an alternate Konoha and I enjoy how he got confused with for an Uzumaki. I hope you continue this story or at least let someone else continue it, I would offer myself but I SUCK at writing. If I were to write it most of the chapters would be a paragraph. I know it's been about 3 years since you updated and will mostly likely not read this message but please continue it.
Hopefully Waiting,
Lillian Blake
Wyrade chapter 6 . 7/19/2016
Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us! :)
I enjoyed it very much, and sincerely hope you wil continue it soon. This has the potential to be expanded imensely, and I would like to read more.
I wish you all the best, and have fun! :)
erik chapter 6 . 4/14/2016
A well written and thought-out reimagination of the canon universe.
sanjiyanunkara chapter 6 . 12/1/2015
3 days without food will kill any ~6 months toddler. Please retcon him a couple food pills or something...

Oh, and a new chap would be nice too ;)
Akritedes chapter 6 . 2/6/2015
This is awesome, please don't let it die.

...hehehe, clean my butt no jutsu. :/
Furionknight chapter 6 . 12/7/2014
I look forward to more :)
Olfrik chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Wow! I never thought I'd actually like a SI. And now I'm hooked!
Please, continue!
daemonkeeper chapter 6 . 12/5/2014
I hope you carry on with this story sometime. The main character may be a bit unbelievable but the world (background) is amazing.
Bah chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Oh, here you are.

So, does it feel good to leave your other fans hanging?

Go over to your other account and I dunno . . . update something. Or update your profile declaring everything abandoned and up for grabs.
rayabn chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
zzzzzzzzzzzz

interested in you
How is everything with you, my name is miss Raya, i picked interest on you after going through your short profile. I really want to have a good friendship with you. Beside i have something very vital to disclose to you, but I found it difficult to express myself here, since it's a public site, Please i will like you to reply to me, through my private e-mail raya_duke
So we can get to know each other better, and also tell you more about me,yours friend Raya
Mr.Black64 chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
Story is dead but still don't understand. If the Uzamaki chakra control exercises are secret... how do they know that that's what he's using?
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