|Reviews for The Art of War|
| KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 2/25
Gonn be a awesome story when I get to the rest of it
| FelineNinjaGrace chapter 42 . 11/30/2016
Not my favorite Lokane story. Very unrealistic character development. The chapters weren't smoothly put together and there was a complete disgust that I felt for this lying, murdering, hateing, deceitful being known as Loki. And yet you wanted to try and get us to root for this psychopath who lies through his teeth about killing his own father. Father, who as we all know, is NOT a bad father. He's not perfect by any means, but he did love Loki.
I'm a complete Lokane fan, but throughout this whole story I felt for the first time that Thor and Jane should be together. It was obvious the Loki was way too bipolar and psychotic. Better ruler my butt. Not to mention, I think you gave him way too much power. It was almost too easy for him to do all his heinous deeds without ANYONE noticing. And all these intelligent immortals couldn't tell? The story is way too "convenient" for my liking.
| Shay chapter 42 . 3/29/2016
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
The way Loki set up Hel was brilliant!
Mature rated Lokane fics are few and far between and ones done as well as this are even more rare, so I appreciate the heck out of it when I find one.
I do think, though, when things cool down in Asgard, Loki is going make the overzealous SHIELD pay for that last visit to Midgard. :)
| Dark Veggie chapter 36 . 1/15/2016
when you are in love...you just love him anyway
| Heidi Walters chapter 42 . 10/22/2015
So good! Read it in a couple of days... This NEEDS a sequel, even just a short one with a few chapters, or an epilogue. Great work! Favorite lokane fic!
| kat chapter 42 . 7/15/2015
read it all in one sitting, great story!
| Guest chapter 42 . 7/14/2015
Thanks for the wonderful read, it was truely wonderful. I loved your vulnerable Loki. I just hope that Thor and Sif figure out a happy ending for themselves.
| GinHanelle chapter 42 . 6/5/2015
Thank you for making me happy today with this story. _ I do so adore tricksy plans and happy endings. By happy endings I mean ones where there is hope that the characters will be able to manage things fine even if we're no longer "watching." In general, I disapprove of relationships and only put up with them because I want to read many stories but few have no pairings, thus I am surprised to say that this is one of those rare times where I find myself very much approving of this couple. Not who they are, but how you have written them-they're pretty much perfect for each other(and in no way are they dysfunctional-what a change!). Many people fail at writing good relationships (even if I laugh at their occasional amusing cuteness), so yes, this was a lovely change. Thank you very much.
Also, I appreciated that quotes for each chapter. I will say, however, that the chapter titles freaked me out! (LOL!) (I don't know, I just kept expecting the worst. One-word titles, or word titles in general just make my imagination start going crazy)
Much love and luck your way :D
| GinHanelle chapter 40 . 6/5/2015
I'm surprised you say there was Sif hate when you wrote this story. I saw the summary and was expecting far worse, so I'm actually rather sympathetic towards Sif. Truly, this might be the only story in which I do not hate her. It's bizarre. O.o
Fantastic job on everything.
| Sparky She-Demon chapter 4 . 6/4/2015
Oh that was fun to read. Especially the ending!
| Bmas chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
Nice fic you should write a sequel
| Confused chapter 9 . 4/24/2015
So far, I'm really liking this. However, wait.. They're in Britain? And Thanksgiving is coming up? I thought that was just an American holiday...
| mfaerie32 chapter 13 . 4/16/2015
I really don't see how she's going to fall in love with him...he has no remorse from the thousands he killed in New York, it doesn't seem you're going the 'he was controlled by Thanos' route, he killed Heimdahl, orchestrated a love potion on Thor, and is now trying to orchestrate the king's death even though the real Odin is in Odinsleep. If she falls in love with him, she's no better than he is. (
| mfaerie32 chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
He's completely evil and that was all kinds of wrong, but DAMN...wet, naked LOKI. Yum Yummy Yum Yum. Lol.
My favorite line...The male minion could live. Lol.
| mfaerie32 chapter 3 . 4/16/2015
How in the hell did he know that she would come back to that spot though? If he's been there for a few days, building up the background of why he's weak, then he couldn't have been following her.