Reviews for Not If But When
catzrool chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
cute!
kyouruhi24 chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
love it so much! D
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Haha! That's hilarious! _
NotJustAGirlJustMe chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Beautiful. The ending was hilarious.
Blessed Unrest chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
...I'm confused, were the parts shuffled on purpose? Cute by the way :)
incurableinsanity chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
I love this. The ending is fantastic. Nice work :)
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Very sweet!
Jieikobu chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I loved it pretense!
It is everything I expected and much more!
You always write so beautifully. I hope one day that I can write as well as you can.
Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to read even more of your Makoto X Haru fics!
They are just so amazing and beautiful to read.
The best of luck in your writing endeavors!
Aiasaka chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
I'm late, but so happy to read this precious fic! It's cute, lovely, a bit sad (poor Haru-chan), sweet, hot (delicious pool sex is delicious) and funny. A lot of feelings induced while reading it.

I loved the names of the goldfishes! The Tachibana Family is wonderful and you even put the Samezuka guys as adorable maids here!

Thank you very much for sharing something so special!
ashira23 chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
nice
maripas chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Hahahahah it was sooo cool! I really like Haruka's honesty and frankness, also the fact that he's so shameless it's so cute D 3 lol I wish this would continue but well Happy Birthday to Makoto too! _
ElfMaidenOfLight chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Loved it! For some reason I love the image of Makoto and Haru sitting at a table, sharing cake, but still chatting idly about the twins and and plans for the days ahead. It's decidedly normal and relaxed feeling; fits them perfectly!