Reviews for Cover Up the Sun
Angie2022 chapter 14 . 3/13/2023
I loved this story very much.
CursesRevenge chapter 14 . 8/31/2022
Ahhhhhh, that was beautiful! This sequel was perfect, and I loved, adored, and cherished every chapter! Congratulations: your story has succeeded in making me cry, grin evilly, and literally laugh out loud (several times, actually.) ;) I truly loved it, and you did a marvelous job of both keeping everyone in character, and telling a fantastical tale with them. The only thing I missed was Loki reconciling with Thor (and Thor discovering that Loki’s not dead) which unfortunately did not occur. Sooooooooo… ARE you gonna write another one? I won’t push my luck. Honestly, if you wanna stop your brilliant Loki and XMen novel series here, then this would be a fine place to end it. However, as one of you devoted readers, I will wait and see and hope, because you never know what can happen!
CursesRevenge chapter 5 . 8/30/2022
Oh no… this is not going to end well.
CursesRevenge chapter 1 . 8/30/2022
*squeals with joy* I FOUND IT! HUZZAH, HOORAY, WAHOO, A GLORIOUS, GLORIOUS SEQUEL! *does happy dance* Well, now that I’ve found this wonderful thing, I’m off to read it! And (sarcastic gasp) there aren’t any “f” words in this chapter; what a delightful surprise! ;)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2020
I love how people try to convince Loki that Jotuns aren't monsters. Seems like nobody have read the comics. The Jotun are exactly that. Amoral creatures that will eat their bloody young. Hell Laufey ate Loki in one of the most recent comics. I agree that being Jotun doesn't make Loki a monster perse, but the fact that he is pretty amoral himself is a sign of his nature.
icecatfire chapter 13 . 1/26/2020
... What's gonna happen to Jason Stryker, Sr. Stryker's son? :/ I feel bad about what happened to him, especially considering it was his DAD who did it to him.
icecatfire chapter 3 . 1/23/2020
... ToT Yeahhhhh, this IS a therapy session, between budding FRIENDS, mind you, but still.

*Fuming/growling* THIS is why you NEED the positive along WITH the negative when you explain rules/punish someone. "don't do this but you're allowed to do this", simple crap like that; DON'T just be stern and punishing, let them KNOW what you want/when they're doing good, not just what they're doing bad/what you DON'T want! *Now trying to BREATHE* ;-;
icecatfire chapter 2 . 1/23/2020
*Thinking of the past story AND this chapter* ... Their talks are sounding more and more like therapy sessions as much as they are bonding/talking/getting to know the other more. Which poor Loki needs, does Asgard, comic OR movie verse, have no therapists? :'(
Sephiroth'sGhost chapter 14 . 12/5/2019
very well done, I enjoyed reading this immensely
Readasaurus chapter 13 . 10/6/2019
This was a really good chapter, and I really don't mean to be rude or mean or anything, but I happened to notice that when Xavier says "I'll be with you the whole way...", you said "...Professor Loki two..." instead of "Professor Loki too". I just wanted to point that out in case you wanted to fix it, but since I'm not very familiar with the layout of and how it posts, I don't know if you can, or will want to, but I'd rather you have that option for yourself.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Also idk if you care but the movie did a great disservice to Catholicism when portraying Nightcrawler in this way because harming your body as punishment for your sins is considered by Catholics as harming the temple of God and the body God gave you and is therefore considered a sin. I had to confess that I slammed my hand on the table to punish myself for a sin I felt great shame for. The priest told me to love myself as God loves me, and to not harm my body, and especially not to permanently harm it. It might make us feel better, but it isn't right. Nightcrawler and his faith were misrepresented greatly in the movie when they made it out like his harming himself was apart of his religion, rather than something his religion opposes.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Well as a Catholic, I was impressed you didn't make Kurt sound like a Protestant Christian but rather a genuine Catholic. Some don't see the difference. There is a little more too it than how you explained it tho. Explaining the nature of God before explaining why you believe God exists to a non believer isn't very efficient but I'll take what I can get. Also the miraculous metal of Our Lady isn't physical protection, but spiritual. You most definitly can die wearing one, but to wear it is to evoke the protection of Our Lady. She will protect you from sin and dying with mortal sin on your soul. You can pray for her to protect you from death, but it isn't a promise of the metal.
MissHealthyOneShot chapter 12 . 12/17/2018
Thank you for this story :) !
Vanadesse Sadroniel chapter 14 . 7/5/2018
Squeee! I love this story! It's so fun to see Loki interacting with others, and making friends, and being so caring and loving to his students, and it makes me so happy! Illyana and Artie hiding behind Loki, and the look on Tony's face would have been priceless to see! I really love to see it when the Avengers find out that Loki is not as bad as everyone thinks they are, and realizing that some people are scared of them. Sometimes I think they let their heads get too big. Amazing work!

pikachukite chapter 10 . 2/10/2018
O.O soo... AWESOME!
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