Reviews for Finns Lucky Adventures
dubstepguy001 chapter 2 . 6/6/2017
I think you should minimize using the "as" words to connect multiple sentences together.
dubstepguy001 chapter 1 . 6/6/2017
nice dialogue and the punctuations were actually on point! What happened here?
PythonGB850 chapter 10 . 4/28/2017
You know your stuff nice work
Guest chapter 10 . 1/11/2017
Not bad, try not to use as so much though
Thatguyphepsy chapter 10 . 1/7/2017
NNNIIIIICCCCCEEEEE
Adventurer chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
Daren u da best just from reading Marcelline x finn
IceFireHeartandSoul chapter 9 . 12/25/2016
The Ice Queen next please!
JetHeart chapter 10 . 12/11/2016
I'm curious to see a Finn x bubblegum
Nathan chapter 10 . 11/1/2016
Hey. Just a reminder but it's been a Year Author please continue.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/8/2016
That means two left right
Smiling Lemon chapter 10 . 9/12/2016
That was fucking hot wonders what's to come!
tyler chapter 10 . 7/15/2016
beddah hope jake dont find out or finn gone learn today
Mr. Haziq chapter 10 . 7/13/2016
I'm curious to see one with the two Fruit Witches...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2016
That escalated pretty fucking quickly
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
Love it do more about huntress wizard and more i really liked it
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