|Reviews for Finns Lucky Adventures|
| Fenrir Wylde Razgriz chapter 10 . 5/21/2016
| MidnightBossWolf chapter 8 . 3/31/2016
Bro. Do you have to turn Finn's actual adventures into something more twisted? I mean, it's not like anyone's dying, but my childlike sense of wonder sure as hell is. He is currently sixteen in the show! He is a virgin and will stay that way, we're talking about a show kids my age (I'm thirteen) watch. This is messed up; could you please write a story that doesn't involve Finn having sex with a random chick from the show? I know you're a good author. That is why I'm asking you to do this, and besides, you'd make a lot of people happy. Not to mention me. Considering that I am a girl, this stuff is less likely to appeal to me, if you know what I mean. You can do better than write pornographic tales... much better. It's useless and contemptuous. Make it fun, playful, and hilarious. Whatever you do, I'll appreciate it unless you do the same shit all over again. Thanks for your time. ;)
- MidnightBossWolf, Gamer, Critic, and Artist
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/27/2016
| Red the Pokemon Master chapter 4 . 11/30/2015
I apologize Darren, but it is an impulse for me to notify of spelling & grammar errors.
You accidentally called Breakfast Princess PB.
You mis-used the word 'dessert', meaning a delicious treat for after dinner. I believe you meant 'Desert'.
| Red the Pokemon Master chapter 10 . 11/21/2015
After this, please.
FINN AND JUNGLE PRINCESS, PLEASE.
| Blank G0D chapter 10 . 11/4/2015
Good job on the chapter. I really liked this Fionna one.
| Danny and the NightWolf chapter 2 . 11/3/2015
I never read one shots before but, I think it won't the last. You really enlightened me to a new reading experience.
| Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 10 . 11/2/2015
Nicely done . Can't wait to see part two.
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/1/2015
| He23t chapter 10 . 11/1/2015
Man your stories are the bomb!
| LordGhostStriker chapter 10 . 11/1/2015
Will the next chapter be backstory plus after battle outdoor sex?
| Feral chapter 9 . 10/22/2015
Colorful Hero. B.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2015
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/13/2015
| Gmann chapter 9 . 10/13/2015