|Reviews for Dark Prince|
| Lilith Riddle chapter 7 . 5/31
Yay! Go Luna!
Noo! Not Pandora!
Xeno, I'm sorry!
| ArachnidHiveMind chapter 9 . 4/15
Yay for Hermione not being portrayed as a total bitch for absolutely no reason
| ArachnidHiveMind chapter 8 . 4/15
Isn’t she too young for Hogwarts?
| ArachnidHiveMind chapter 8 . 4/15
Mate I’m just happy Luna is on Harry’s side
| corjca1 chapter 1 . 3/20
lillie you dirty dirty dirty disgusting piece of filth you no good whore just die bitch lol
| darthkratos24 chapter 29 . 1/12
Really what kinda bullshit is this? Of all the things he's done of all the things he's cackled at maddly you've suddenly made it so he "can't kill" why? Before you finally realised he's a bloody child? It's a bit fuckin late now your own plot has him Muggle hunting with Bellatrix I don't know if you know this but Bellatrix didn't exactly hug the fuckin muggles she found! Dumbass
| darthkratos24 chapter 14 . 1/12
Great another boring ass "dream" scene ohhhh how scary and interesting... I'm being sarcastic
| darthkratos24 chapter 10 . 1/12
... Why the fuck put Luna in Gryffindor? It serves nothing it would of been good to put her with the claws? Or hell put longbottom with her as he has no Slytherin traits? Even with your "she's the perfect spy" we all know you're going for but still makes no fuckin sense? Well other then you screaming out loud "ITS FOR PLOT REASONS" because there was no build up no hint to her having Gryffindor mannerisms for all intebt and purpose she should be in Slytherin or ravenclaw but noooo you need that drama tag so Gryffindor it is... Utter bollocks Neville shouldn't be a Slytherin Luna shouldn't be a Gryffindor by they're personalities I'd drop nev in Gryffindor with luna if you really want to throw her there and don't want her any where else for unknown reasons other then you cackling about "surprising" people when in reality you just probably killed your own story I mean it's dead been so for a few years but right here is where it died and where you saw so many people leave right?
| darthkratos24 chapter 9 . 1/12
I'm gonna get a lot of flack for this but I don't care because it needs saying. Hermione isn't wise she not really smart either. She has intelligence I'll give her that but she uses it all the wrong way she believes everything and anything from a book or adult it's ridiculous really. And adding her into your "dark" harry book proves you're aiming more for gray then dark, just admit it your more gray then dark it's fine you're going for a Daphne pairing anyway she's normally seen as gray but a dark pureblooded harry wouldn't look at Granger let alone talk to her you're just one of the weird ass Hermione fan boys that throw her into every fuckin thing because she's so "smirt" and so "cool"... When she's really not
| darthkratos24 chapter 6 . 1/12
No no no for all the things unholy don't do a stupid over used retarded plot of "he has a darkness inside that gets out" it's retarded and pointless most only use it to give the character a reason to go dark then back to light I swear if you make this harry light I'll find away to burn this work down
| darthkratos24 chapter 2 . 1/12
He set fire to a room full of people because he was jealous...why the fuck is he actually listening to the waste of space durslays? He could kill them all at night by burning the house down and act like the only surviver to the muggles maybe "accidentally" show them he was abused so of any of them survived it wouldn't be pleasant ... but no we need the drama of child abuse because reasons
| 11bellad0nna11 chapter 16 . 12/25/2021
The characters seriously do not act 12. This book could've been a lot better.. yikes
| DalkonCledwin chapter 5 . 10/28/2021
I can’t see how a romantic pairing is gonna work with all this “trust no one” stuff being hammered into Harry’s head like this.
Why is everyone ignoring the fact that Harry is currently bleeding out from several long and very deep lacerations caused by the Sectumsempra curse?
How on Earth did Voldemort get his hands on that wand so early in the story?
| DalkonCledwin chapter 3 . 10/27/2021
Okay, so obviously this is a complete and total alternate reality to the one which appears in the canonical novels, since multiple things occurring in this story are not aligning with the novels… and not all of them are as easily explained as the Potters being blessed with twins.
Pottem? Pottest? Wut?
| ZombeyUnicorn chapter 29 . 9/23/2021
Ahhhh some nice father and son activities on christmas. How heartwarming and adorable!
What confuses me though is that Hadrian does not want to kill. Isn't he going Muggle Hunting with Bella once ina while? Do they not kill them?