Fuck my comment from the other chapter. I can't type of taplets to save my life. I'm on a laptop now which is easier. What I meant was she should have more Chakra because she is a Uzumaki and have the same biological DNA as Naruto. But you make her Chakra levels lower which I don't seem to understand. The chakra Naruto has is his own due to being a Uzumaki and the reason its hard for him to control is because of the seal. That's his Chakra, not Naruto's. She should also slightly struggle with Chakra control because of her Chakra pool levels. Also I still hate Sakura for how rude she was but the poor development between the teams before she died is... They didn't have only three months before the Chunin Exams. They had many c-ranks which you left out. Yes I know that you want it to be short but leaving out many other things is... weird.

The fact that they all have had missions for months together such as the Wave mission and The Land of the Tea which are in Naruto while the others are shown in Shippuden. I understand if you want to rush or just forgot but you shouldn't because you are a writer.

She is an Uzumaki so she should have an enormous amount of Hakra jus like Kuruma. The chakra he has his is own, she is his twin. I hate when people forget that. Also fuck Sasuke and sakura

She killed Tora omg

Actually Naruto lives in a pretty big place. It even has a training room. You should search it up c:

Last review, continued. Didn’t mean to hit submit yet. What I wanted to say was why do people take so much time out of their day to invest in reading fan fiction, something that is supposed to be fun and lighthearted and not analyzed to shreds or picked apart for every single flaw/stray from canon... stick to close to the plot, and you’re just regurgitating the original content. Stray too far from the plot and now everyone is upset you’ve taken it in a new direction bc it wasn’t the outcome THEY went into reading this wanting to see. I wish people would just relax and enjoy it for what it is: one person’s interpretation of a world that they clearly enjoy enough to seek out fanfic on... why spend so much energy hating?

Ahhh, sorry. It’s just disheartening to see. For what it’s worth I’m enjoying this a lot and I’m glad to see you aren’t exactly shy to drop in a little bit of romance and innuendo already. I just finished the beast of a story Dreaming of Sunshine and there’s not really any romance to be had there, so of course I had to keep hunting to sate my kakashi-eque hunger for trashy, witty adventure/drama/romance stories. And, well, here I am. I shall report back with a proper review. For now, thank you for sharing all of this hard work with us, and for persevering through the uncalled-for rudeness I see littered in the reviews.

I just started this and I don’t claim to be an expert in the naruto-verse but I must say... the aggression oozing from the reviews on this fic are puzzling to me.

This story is really incredible! I think I would even enjoy re-reading this one day - that's how good this! Thank you for this amazing story! I love it!

I love Aiko and I love your writing style. Thank you for writing this!

Twins are always the same gender should have had her an older sister

GAHHHHH I’m dyingggg lmaooo

that was good

The third hokage is such a tool bag

omy i binge read this in 3 days, I love the story. Even if u killed of so much important canon characters, the plot still made sense.. I like how udidnt pair her with anyone in the story. (im still shook from tht epilogue)

this is one of the best si/oc fanfic ive read :0

noooo :( i dont ship her wth gaara, theyre like siblings gahaha

i didnt expect sakura to die :00