Reviews for Vapors
Guest chapter 92 . 4/28
Dude did you know you aiko could have more than 1 summon contract? She could maybe do the reverse summoning jutsu that jiraya did when he was a genin...i wonder whats she’ll get? A badger? A wolf? Or would it be a fox since she was kushinas daughter and kuramas and kushinas chakra kinda mixed with her own like naruto

Frankly im suprised she and naruto doesnt have relativly same chakra level than naruto at his base
Guest chapter 91 . 4/28
Doesnt aiko know how the strength of a hundred seal works? And how to do it? Why isnt she doing it? If she started when she was 4 she could have the chakra comparable to shukaku, hell why doesnt she make a seal that sucks chakra? They have seals that seals away chakra but she cant suck it in herself or make a chakra battery? Of nature energy? She could perpetually be in sage mode and have super everything...althouuuuughhh i guess shes pretty bussy
Guest chapter 91 . 4/28
Its gonna be the best fuck you if she could plant danzo explosive heart seal on her enemies and be like daidara and say katsu when she throws them into the sky for gorry fireworks
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 1 . 4/27
For once I am fully on the Uchihas side. That was fully illegal and a disgrace.
Though I doubt it will happen...for once I hope the Uchihas win and Itachi doesn't kill them all.
44220 lol chapter 8 . 4/27
ITs seems broken
Guest chapter 65 . 4/27
Its gonna be super funny when she goes to the beach with her kage tat
Guest chapter 49 . 4/27
Yo bro anyone can learn the base rasengan its pure chakra with no nature element in it what she cant do (easily)is the fuuton rasengan where naruto shaped it to make the rasenshuriken

So aiko would be fine using it she could probably make a suiton rasengan if she wanted and it would probably have more mass and pack more punch than the wind and she could even put some poisons in it if shreding her enemies didnt kill them for some reason
Guest chapter 20 . 4/26
Whats da hold up with danzo tho? They ninja they could just replace the guy with a henge for a reaaaaally long time
Guest chapter 16 . 4/26
This is fine karins more likable anyhow at least to me cuz the 4 of them can make up an trauma orphan scquad
That2-one3-girl4 chapter 27 . 4/17
Why the hell is Aiko so lame? Like she is so AVERAGE. What summons will she have? What isher speciality? Naruto and sasuke and ANKO of all people are cool as fuck but she is so lammmeee. What is the point of being invested in her for like the first half if we don't see her doing anything interesting?
NouvelleVoix chapter 8 . 4/11
I doubt you're still reading reviews on this long-finished fic, but somehow the website exploded this chapter. If you're still around, could you take a look at it?
ThunderDragonXXx chapter 8 . 3/13
the fuck happened to chapter 8?
Anonsaurous Rex chapter 46 . 3/13
Chapter 46 is borked. I know this is old news on a finished story but if you are still active this might need looking into.
thescriptwelder chapter 8 . 2/21
um this chapter is illegible,,,
Iamgroot474 chapter 103 . 2/21
This is pretty great, tbh, but there's a lot of oddities like how scenes end and plot points that are never truly explored but should probably be rearranged to make any sense time-wise that leave it feeling less like a finished product and more like a first draft. Overall, I think if you went back and reread and rewrote this, you'd definitely pull out a polished piece, but either way this is an interesting story to be sure.

Have a good day!
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