Reviews for Vapors
KaKashi's Okami chapter 80 . 9/13/2020
What!? The hell I totally missed the first time she made out with sai! What chapter was that? Was it on AO3?
laciesong97 chapter 4 . 8/11/2020
Gosh, I didn't expect that ending coming at al. LOL
Someone chapter 20 . 8/4/2020
But I really enjoy this story c: And I seriously need to stop typing so fast without reviewing what I wrote... I mean't its his chakra, not Kurama's.
Someone chapter 20 . 8/4/2020
Fuck my comment from the other chapter. I can't type of taplets to save my life. I'm on a laptop now which is easier. What I meant was she should have more Chakra because she is a Uzumaki and have the same biological DNA as Naruto. But you make her Chakra levels lower which I don't seem to understand. The chakra Naruto has is his own due to being a Uzumaki and the reason its hard for him to control is because of the seal. That's his Chakra, not Naruto's. She should also slightly struggle with Chakra control because of her Chakra pool levels. Also I still hate Sakura for how rude she was but the poor development between the teams before she died is... They didn't have only three months before the Chunin Exams. They had many c-ranks which you left out. Yes I know that you want it to be short but leaving out many other things is... weird.

The fact that they all have had missions for months together such as the Wave mission and The Land of the Tea which are in Naruto while the others are shown in Shippuden. I understand if you want to rush or just forgot but you shouldn't because you are a writer.
Someone chapter 9 . 8/4/2020
She is an Uzumaki so she should have an enormous amount of Hakra jus like Kuruma. The chakra he has his is own, she is his twin. I hate when people forget that. Also fuck Sasuke and sakura
Someone chapter 4 . 8/4/2020
She killed Tora omg
Someone chapter 3 . 8/4/2020
Actually Naruto lives in a pretty big place. It even has a training room. You should search it up c:
Cat chapter 8 . 7/27/2020
Last review, continued. Didn’t mean to hit submit yet. What I wanted to say was why do people take so much time out of their day to invest in reading fan fiction, something that is supposed to be fun and lighthearted and not analyzed to shreds or picked apart for every single flaw/stray from canon... stick to close to the plot, and you’re just regurgitating the original content. Stray too far from the plot and now everyone is upset you’ve taken it in a new direction bc it wasn’t the outcome THEY went into reading this wanting to see. I wish people would just relax and enjoy it for what it is: one person’s interpretation of a world that they clearly enjoy enough to seek out fanfic on... why spend so much energy hating?

Ahhh, sorry. It’s just disheartening to see. For what it’s worth I’m enjoying this a lot and I’m glad to see you aren’t exactly shy to drop in a little bit of romance and innuendo already. I just finished the beast of a story Dreaming of Sunshine and there’s not really any romance to be had there, so of course I had to keep hunting to sate my kakashi-eque hunger for trashy, witty adventure/drama/romance stories. And, well, here I am. I shall report back with a proper review. For now, thank you for sharing all of this hard work with us, and for persevering through the uncalled-for rudeness I see littered in the reviews.
Cat chapter 8 . 7/27/2020
I just started this and I don’t claim to be an expert in the naruto-verse but I must say... the aggression oozing from the reviews on this fic are puzzling to me.
Sentariana chapter 103 . 7/19/2020
This story is really incredible! I think I would even enjoy re-reading this one day - that's how good this! Thank you for this amazing story! I love it!
Sentariana chapter 8 . 7/13/2020
I love Aiko and I love your writing style. Thank you for writing this!
U gay as fudge chapter 1 . 7/11/2020
Twins are always the same gender should have had her an older sister
Whatkooloser chapter 30 . 7/9/2020
GAHHHHH I’m dyingggg lmaooo
blackbox47 chapter 43 . 7/6/2020
that was good
lukeskywalkeer chapter 1 . 6/30/2020
The third hokage is such a tool bag
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