Reviews for Sins of the Past
Guest chapter 24 . 2/7
Great story
Kazza18 chapter 24 . 8/21/2016
Wow. Out of all the stories you have on Fanfiction, this is the last one I wanted to read. I really thought it just wouldn't be that great. In fact, it's probably one of my favourites. And I think Bella kind of is a hero in the story, along with the Volturi. They look out for each other. Very admirable. Just don't get on their bad side...
Vwchick chapter 24 . 6/9/2016
Wonderful ending- sad, poignant, fricking hilarious at moments- even though as you said " it's the feel good story of the year" it was really good- and even tragically beautiful in places- thank you for posting this
Vwchick chapter 17 . 6/9/2016
I wasn't sure how much I would like this story- but I love it! You are a super talented writer! And omg your story about your daughter, I could just picture my husband I know he already gets this look on his face when she asks for money for Victoria's secert I also love the humor you can put even into a not so light story- I was dying with how Bella and Jane have been messing with Caius - amazing story! Thank you!
Brandi Neri chapter 24 . 5/2/2016
loved it
gotitbad chapter 24 . 3/29/2016
This was a cool idea for a story! I had a hard time leaving it to do real life!
5havidreader chapter 24 . 2/24/2016
I could kiss you for writing such a freaking masterpiece! seriously, amazing work.
MarbellaS chapter 24 . 1/21/2016
You know, I really did not want to read this story. I was only going to read the first chapter. But I read that chapter and then it drew me in. I couldn't put it down. I started it last night around 8 and went to sleep at 2, woke up at 11 and immediately grabbed my phone to start reading again. I just finished it. It's 3 pm. This story got to me. I love your other stories. I love To. This is not my favorite of your stories, but it is the most memorable. Thank you for this story, and all of your other ones.
monay9e chapter 24 . 12/2/2015
Bravo! I couldn't stop reading this story! You are an and exceptional writer. I loved this story, Bella was bad ass.
monay9e chapter 10 . 12/2/2015
Damn this story is good! I never would have thought that it was Billy!
miawmiaw chapter 18 . 10/5/2015
Oooohhh that visit of Peter and company was the funniest encounter I have ever read. I love it!
miszharleyquinn chapter 24 . 9/13/2015
Every time I pick up my fone and read one of your stories I get lost in the world you have written I have always enjoyed reading your works but this by far was the best I have read since I started reading fanfiction. I can't wait for more. I know it won't be in the twilight universe but I still plan on enjoying every world you write
Yurihentai641 chapter 6 . 8/27/2015
Just confused but i feel that Jane looks too young to be in a relationship with Bella, humans must certainly have a problem with it if not other vampires.
Charlie0925 chapter 24 . 8/2/2015
Wow, this was a brilliant read! Hard to read at times but wonderfully written, great job hon! ;o)
Debbie White chapter 24 . 6/7/2015
Great story! I'm glad you didn't kill the entire tribe... thanks for writing it! :)
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