|Reviews for Crossing the Lines|
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/12
A great chapter, the right mix of lemons and heartfelt emotion. :) Also my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family, I hop everything turns out alright for your mum.
| huntingforwitches chapter 14 . 3/12
I just want to say I love this story, and your other one "the blizzard".
You are a fantastic writer, and as a reader I feel I am able to connect with your characters.
I read your bio. I'm so sorry to hear about your Mum, and that you are not getting the assistance for your kids. I hope you get some respite from RL stress or there is some better news/good luck on the horizon. Take care of yourself and thank you for sharing your wonderful ideas.
| Rebadams7 chapter 14 . 3/11
He has no clue. He only sleeps alone. How sad...
| Vernoodle chapter 14 . 3/10
This is the first time I've read a fanfic that wasn't already completed...now I know why. Lol. This is SO good and now I have to wait to read one chapter a week! :'( lol
| BlueJean452 chapter 14 . 3/9
Just read the whole thing. Can't wait for more.
| roxiegirl chapter 14 . 3/9
Enjoy it? I'm looking all over the house for batteries...for you know what! Lol. Awesome chapter! Lit my fire! *wink wink*. Thanks bb.
| Cullen14 chapter 14 . 3/9
| BeatrizBeltran chapter 14 . 3/9
Really love this story. Hoping to know more about Edward's life.
| SLKerouac chapter 14 . 3/8
Bella is being fed by Mr. Masen. He ordered food from an expensive restaurant. Bella has never had anything like what he had ordered. Then after cleaning up it was time for dessert. Bella was serving him his birthday cake and coffee. He had her bring it in the living room. His gift is also there. Bella sings him "Happy Birthday" with a candle to make a wish. He tells her to make the wish for him. He eats his cake while watching one of the movies that Bella had given him. After a while it was time for Mr. Masen to take control. He took Bella to his bedroom. It was him showing her the pleasures that she has never had. It was going to be his way only. After he talk to her about staying the night. Bella told him about Alice. She really did not want to stay as Seth was with Alice's mother. How would they explain about Bella being gone all night. Mr. Masen talked about him sleeping alone and that was the out for Bella. She would go home when he went to bed. Mr. Masen was determined that Bella was going to be his. What time does Bella get to leave? What does Alice say to her when she comes to get Seth? Does Mr. Masen do some background check on Bella? Does he find out about Seth? Why is Mr. Masen all alone? What was with his family? Will Bella open up to Mr. Masen? Will Mr. Masen start to feel more comfortable with Bella to talk to her about his life? About what he does for a living? Keep writing!
| vivalarye chapter 14 . 3/8
omg. omg. omg. damn, bella! you're a lucky girl!
| chicalicious chapter 14 . 3/8
I'm so happy for Isabella and Mr. Masen. But I am confused as to why he would want her to spend the night if he did not intend for her to sleep with him. I guess he would want her close by so he could pleasure her and himself just by walking down the hall? I'm curious as to how long Isabella will be able to keep Seth a secret.
| anglictash chapter 14 . 3/8
Lord you Ђɑ̤̥̈̊νε me so wet!
| eboni721 chapter 14 . 3/8
yay! an uuuppppdate!
| MamaJoyof3 chapter 14 . 3/8
I love that he wants to make her happy too!
| Scanafritzy chapter 14 . 3/8
I have mad love for this story. Thank you for updating. :)