|Reviews for Despair|
| lc-i2 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Well, let me leave a review. It's just my opinionnon your fanfic, okay? Nothing too formal.
I liked the way you wrote the angst, it seems simple and you don't go in circles like other authors. Yes, I really loved that.
But on the other hand, this story left me hanged. Even though the plot was good, it seemed empty, like you didn't fill it to its capacity. But who am I to judge? And besides, you mentioned that you wrote this a year ago, if I'm not mistaken. Well, I asume you're way better now
(I apologise for any mistakes in my grammar or spelling)