Reviews for Esau and Jacob say their goodbyes
Magnum65 chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
Oh ho! The plot thickens. :D I was wondering how long it was going to take her. I can see several ways this can go. It will be fun to see how you resolve this angsty mess.

I've enjoyed your writing very much. Thank you!
Carina chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
I'm soo jealous that you're going to see Coriolanus and Tom! xD Beautiful chapter, once again. My heart keeps shattering with each one. Those letters to Thor... I love the way you write Loki (and everybody else, for that matter). So I assume that Jane's going to tell Thor? God, Loki, please don't die!
Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
Oh! So Jane /is/ going to tell Thor! Or at least she plans too... though Loki could be dead by the time she got back with Thor... ah geez fjkdlsajfkdsjf da heartache! Like seriously, you've been slowly killing us along with Loki this entire story... and you really are going to kill us along with Loki, aren't you?
Cindy chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
Oh I sooo envy you that you will see Tom in person, and in Coriolanus no less! Please tell us about the experience later!

This chapter is a heart killer! I would like to hope that Loki will live in the end but it seems unlikely. Darn it! I will cry my eyes out. Youre a wonderful writer!

I dont need to say that but... Have fun saturday! D ;)
Cecilia Green chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
My heart is crying right now. You're such a beautiful writer. I can't wait for the tearful reunion in the next chapter. Update soon, ok?
Guest chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
It's about time. :)
Guest chapter 10 . 1/26/2014
Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 10 . 1/23/2014
Nyarg, da feels! ;-;

And oh, that moment when it seemed like Thor and Odin just might figure out that it had been Loki for a time...
GoodForBad chapter 10 . 1/22/2014
Once again, the dam of feels has burst.

I thought for sure Loki was going to be busted when Odin and Thor were speaking. I liked what you did it lead into Thor's emotional outburst, his thoughts, etc. So sad. He needs a hug.

Jane and Loki's interactions crack me up, oddly enough. Like they are both stubborn and smart, yet find themselves in the midst of this unprecedented and pretty tragic situation. I love it.
vana9 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
I love this story so, so much, but at the same time, it's just breaking my heart! Please, please, I beg you, save Loki! After everything he and Thor went through, I want so badly for them to have a happy ending where they both live and are reconciled. Please show that miracles exist and that there's hope in the world!
Avatar Aang chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhh can't wait for more poor Loki xxxxxx love it x love it x love it x
Maia2 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Uh oh.. interesting talk with Odin, wasn't it? I loved how even though they are clearly aware something is wrong, they are attributing it to Odin's age and health. Thor continues to break my heart. Oh, Loki, *what* are you doing to him? When he just broke down in front of his father, in front of his King, it just... Oh, baby. He so very much needs a world of hugs. And his baby brother. "Keep him safe and with you... Mama" Gahhh.
And then there's the other one. So much pain. And hurt. And fear. And oh, Loki, playing the guilt card now, huh? "He'll never forgive you.." I know you're hurting, but that's not nice.
Isn't it obvious?
Thanks for the update and London rocks.
isi7140 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Gah everyone is so broken and sad and that's about it. They all care too much for anything to work out.
DraejonSoul chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I don't know why I keep coming back to this story knowing I'd either try to hold back tears or break my heart a little, but I can't. I'm not even sure if this is a complaint, or a weird roundabout compliment on how your story can manipulate my emotions so.

Will there ever be a semblance of a happy ending for Loki? I'm not sure if my heart can take it anymore! But being a bit of a masochist, I'll be sure to be reading the next chapters and shatter my heart in a hundred pieces all over again.
Eringo94 chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I'm starting to have a really bad feeling that Loki is actually going to stay away from Thor throughout this whole story. Please tell me I'm wrong. They have to meet each other again. Don't let Thor be alone again... Ugh I freaking cried when he began weeping infront of Odin. Why must you break my heart so thoroughly?
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