Reviews for Esau and Jacob say their goodbyes
Guest chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
It's about time. :)
Guest chapter 10 . 1/26/2014
Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 10 . 1/23/2014
Nyarg, da feels! ;-;

And oh, that moment when it seemed like Thor and Odin just might figure out that it had been Loki for a time...
GoodForBad chapter 10 . 1/22/2014
Once again, the dam of feels has burst.

I thought for sure Loki was going to be busted when Odin and Thor were speaking. I liked what you did it lead into Thor's emotional outburst, his thoughts, etc. So sad. He needs a hug.

Jane and Loki's interactions crack me up, oddly enough. Like they are both stubborn and smart, yet find themselves in the midst of this unprecedented and pretty tragic situation. I love it.
vana9 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
I love this story so, so much, but at the same time, it's just breaking my heart! Please, please, I beg you, save Loki! After everything he and Thor went through, I want so badly for them to have a happy ending where they both live and are reconciled. Please show that miracles exist and that there's hope in the world!
Avatar Aang chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhh can't wait for more poor Loki xxxxxx love it x love it x love it x
Maia2 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Uh oh.. interesting talk with Odin, wasn't it? I loved how even though they are clearly aware something is wrong, they are attributing it to Odin's age and health. Thor continues to break my heart. Oh, Loki, *what* are you doing to him? When he just broke down in front of his father, in front of his King, it just... Oh, baby. He so very much needs a world of hugs. And his baby brother. "Keep him safe and with you... Mama" Gahhh.
And then there's the other one. So much pain. And hurt. And fear. And oh, Loki, playing the guilt card now, huh? "He'll never forgive you.." I know you're hurting, but that's not nice.
Isn't it obvious?
Thanks for the update and London rocks.
isi7140 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
Gah everyone is so broken and sad and that's about it. They all care too much for anything to work out.
DraejonSoul chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I don't know why I keep coming back to this story knowing I'd either try to hold back tears or break my heart a little, but I can't. I'm not even sure if this is a complaint, or a weird roundabout compliment on how your story can manipulate my emotions so.

Will there ever be a semblance of a happy ending for Loki? I'm not sure if my heart can take it anymore! But being a bit of a masochist, I'll be sure to be reading the next chapters and shatter my heart in a hundred pieces all over again.
Eringo94 chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I'm starting to have a really bad feeling that Loki is actually going to stay away from Thor throughout this whole story. Please tell me I'm wrong. They have to meet each other again. Don't let Thor be alone again... Ugh I freaking cried when he began weeping infront of Odin. Why must you break my heart so thoroughly?
HaloFin17 chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
I shamelessly cried right along with Thor in this one. You really do such a great job of making me feel sympathy for his unhappy situation in all of this - how alone he really is now. I had hoped he and Odin might put two and two together about "well, then, who did Thor talk to, if not Odin?", but no. I suppose their thoughts were directed elsewhere in grief.

The more we move along here, the more I think I would be okay with Loki dying after all, as long as he could be reunited with Frigga and find his rest. Of course, it'd be better if he could work things out with Thor and be miraculously saved somehow, but I'll settle for the former alternative as well. Though I still hope he and Thor actually will get to say their goodbyes. I think there will be a gaping hole in my heart forever if they don't...but no pressure, right?

Enjoy London, my friend!
myriad-souls chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
Oh you poor boy *hugs Loki tightly while sobbing like a child*
Carina chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
This is one of the best things about my Mondays, LOL!
My heart just shattered into a million pieces. Amazing chapter. You write Loki so well.
Sumi Anzu chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
Wahhhhh he didnt said who he did it for, but we know that he did for his brother thor. T.T

Omg! U make loki voiced a good point that thor will hate and blame jane fo not being there for loki for the second time.

I am on edge wondering if jane will tell thor or not, or thor find out on his own.

Will this end with short or no goodbye between them. Only thor talking to his corpse?
Can mighty odin revive loki?

Update soon but dont rush enjoy london and it glory!
isaalacrymosaa chapter 10 . 1/20/2014
ohhh my heart!
so painful i can feel it
i can feel loki dying
less and less time
is sad , and is sweet how jane still care about him
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