Reviews for Esau and Jacob say their goodbyes
HaloFin17 chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
It's official now - you can make me cry at will, and I am powerless to stop you. Every chapter gets me choked up at one point or another, and we haven't even reached the end yet. What am I supposed to do then, when we finally reach the grand conclusion of all you've been building up to?

I honestly thought the whole saving Thor episode would last longer, but it's served its purpose of getting Loki back around Thor again. I have also been wondering if maybe you would kill Thor first (to completely crush Loki), but then find Loki some noble way to spend his final moments so he can ultimately rejoin his brother and mother in the afterlife. We'll see.

And that line of Loki's at the end about "sides" was simply perfect! Sums up just about everything about him, doesn't it?

Have a great trip!
Halo
Maia2 chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
Oh, Loki... It was interesting to read the things he did. The netting of the building, the link with his brother's lungs. It's always fun to read how Loki's magic works.
Poor Jane, always stuck in the middle. I am glad Loki came to see Thor. Even if Thor doesn't know. Loki's right. He's always by Thor's side.
Avatar Aang chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
Oooooooooohhhhhhhh loveeeeee it xxxxx can't wait to find out what happens xxxx
vana9 chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
That was so beautiful and tragic. Your writing is amazing! This was such a heartwrenching chapter. Please please please please please give us a miracle! After everything that has between Thor and Loki I am begging you, like on the floor ready to kiss your feet begging you, for a happy ending, for Loki to find a cure and for him and Thor to reconcile. I read literature and fanfiction to escape reality, to see the impossible made possible; happy endings show that there is hope in the world, that there are second chances and redemption. PRETTY PLEASE give Loki and Thor the happy ending they deserve!
Sybretooth chapter 9 . 1/14/2014
Oh my word you just made me heartbroken and that, I assure you, does not happen often.
Donna Rose chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
no frick im crying now shoot darn it my h e ar t hurts
Huginn89 chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
It broke my heart to read this...
Loki might have promised himself to never see Thor again, but you know what they say... Blood is thicker than water.
properlycolorful chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
Must you kill me as I read?

I expected some Thorki fluff and I got angst. How can you do this to me? Even if the writing is beautiful and superbly written, it doesn't excuse how much my heart clutches inside my chest. Poor Loki's suffering and breaking and going to die eventually, while Thor has no idea and is going through the same thing. It makes me wish I could see the upcoming chapters.

Anyway, hopefully you update while you're in London. I can't survive with this cliffhanger.
Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
Oh... *lets out a breath* Oh my heart aches. You know, I'm starting to realize that Thor probably never actually does figure out that Loki was still alive, huh? Loki's dying, and no matter how much I do want things to be right between them... I guess they never really can be... like Loki said, though, and there's so much beauty in the tragedy of this, because Loki loves and Loki cares and he knows that Thor does too, and Thor will probably never know... and how Loki didn't want to look at Thor's face because he was afraid he wouldn't be able to leave, and then he does finally look at Thor's face and he still leaves... I can't even imagine how painful that must have been for him. I do hope though that Thor heard him in his coma - though he'll probably just think that he was so close to death that he was able to hear the voice of Loki's ghost... and Loki's sort of pep talk to Thor about waking up was heartbreaking and heartwrenching and heartwarming and just everything and that second-to-last line especially, what Loki said... that was like a physical blow I felt that so keenly, I'm not even kidding ;-;

I hope you have a great time in London! :)
Carina chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
Ahh, this was PERFECT and so heart-wrenching. "'I said that I have no side,' Loki says. 'And yet I always find myself by Thor's.'" I love this line so much.
The Pearl Maiden chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
That's it! *slams computer onto ground* I'M DONE. EXCUSE ME. *weeps*
not-active.abandoned-account chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
Pretty heartwrenching chapter! :'( I almost cried... That last line was brilliant :) I'm not even joking when I say this would make a great Thor 3, like showing the hidden story going on during Avengers 2. Jane and Loki centric. It'd be perfect. You're perfect. *bursts into tears* You're going to London? Sweet! Only 3 more chapters? *droops a little* Well, I've enjoyed the ride :)
Cecilia Green chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
This is so sweet! But I was really looking forward to Thor discovering Loki is alive. When will that happen?
Guest chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
Yay! Are you going to watch Coriolanus?! I so envy you! Good luck and safe travel! Tell us of it later please!
Lemomina chapter 9 . 1/13/2014
I should always make sure that I don't have any makeup on my face before reading this story, my face is full of mascara now, I look quite terrible, but thank you for this story, that is breaking my heart in the best way .
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