|Reviews for Esau and Jacob say their goodbyes|
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Ooooh I'm very hooked
| Eringo94 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
I have to to wait until next Monday now? This is going to be a long long long week. That was so amazing and LOL Loki didn't know what to write on the napkin and ohmygosh Thor stop bein sad, you make me sad.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job! :D
| Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
well yeah Loki messing with cosmic balances to give you a big sqrew you to thanos is nice. it blowing up in his face is great as well!
seriously, I hope Jane does someintresting stuff here. hes in a position to make a MESS.
| fortheweightofus chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
oh my god the CLIFFHANGER.
I loved this chapter, but HOW am I going to wait a whole week!?
Nevertheless, superb as usual. Your Thor angst is perfect and it's making me weep. In a good way. Can't wait until the next chapter!
| TheObsessor11294 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
I NEED MORE!
| Princess Twila chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOKI DARN YOU NEBULA AND AMORA I AGREE WITH LOKI KEEP YOUR DARN SQUABBLES WITHIN A CONTAINED RADIUS
| Roskva chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
Holy crap. This is amazing. I can *feel* Loki's chest burning and Thor's sorrow. Cannot wait to see where this is going!
| Donna Rose chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
wait though didn't jane say her mum was alive in thor 2
other wise uh oh u done goofed loki u done goofed
| isaalacrymosaa chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
OMG! THAT WAS EPIC!
AND AWESOME! loki saving jane
and the explotion magic! amora
i really i can't wait to the next,this is a lokane fic? or loki and jane friendship
anyway lokane is friendship too hehe
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
ah, and there goes science!Jane. science!Jane has no self-preservation instincts whatsoever.
i think it's too early for me to suppose what exactly is going on with Loki, or what exactly is triggering the pain (even more so), so i'll just sit back and wait to see this story progress further.
i look forward to it.
| GoodForBad chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
AHHHHHH, the sheer wonder of this story is beyond what I can accurately describe in a review. I am LOVING this.
| Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
THAT'S - THAT'S- THAT'S -
OKAY FEELS, LIKE SERIOUSLY CALM DOWN
First of all, loved the chapter! fjdlksajfkdsjf loved it! Thor and Loki's heartache and heartbreak, how they ache for each other so, how Thor picked flowers for his dead mother and supposed dead brother, and how he just wants to be with them... the song "Like You" by Evanescence pop into anybody else's head during that part? 'Cause it definitely popped into mine. And ohhhhhhh Lokiiiiiiiiii how his wound is killing him but he can't die, and how much he wants to see Thor and his little game of seeing how close he can get Jane to talk about Thor without directly asking, and then I just LOVED that he's been manipulating Amora and Nebula and Ronan and the people Thanos might ally with into warring with each other so they can't assist Thanos effectively because that's just so LOKI and I love that you're including that brilliant, genius, manipulative scheming part of him along with all this emotional pain *-* AND DAT ENDING how Loki feels the need to save Jane so that Thor doesn't go berserk, and then Loki overexerting himself and his disguise failing and Jane seeing him... KFLDJSAFKLDSJ I can't wait to read what happens next! Love love love this :3
| okavangodino chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
Thor picking flowers for Frigga and Loki...I am so sad with that scene at the shore.
So Loki died, is dying, will die...why am I exposing myself to this pain? :S
Loki and Jane have in common that they spend two years pining for Thor! ;)
What plan did he make now? Will it blow up in his face as spectacularly as Ronan (?) and Amoras tantrums? :S
And now his disguise failed...how will Jane react to seeing Thaniel was Loki all along?
After watching the movie I was really asking myself what scene or what would explain the 'sorries' and the 'why did you not listen, you fool' and 'yes I am a fool'. I felt it was all so disconnected.
Looking forward to more even if I know it will hurt too much. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
Ooooooooohhhhh can't wait for more xxxxx
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
Moreeeeeeeeee I love it xxxxxxxxxxx