|Reviews for Esau and Jacob say their goodbyes|
| Wicked R chapter 9 . 4/14/2014
So much emotion!
| Wicked R chapter 8 . 4/14/2014
| Wicked R chapter 5 . 4/14/2014
Now I'm cold. Chilling chapter.
| Wicked R chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Nail bitingly exciting!
| Autumn Fire Spirit Yggdrasil chapter 12 . 4/12/2014
Oh my God I'm crying even through I don't have any more tears.
| Dazja chapter 12 . 4/6/2014
| Kon13 chapter 11 . 3/27/2014
Okay, this review is for the alternate ending.
If you don't go and read the alternate ending because its on a different site or some other reason, you should go and read it anyway. The alternate ending is just so amazing and beautiful and just... Ugh! You HAVE to read it! Ecpecially if you love Lokane. The alternate ending is just perfect.
| Kon13 chapter 12 . 3/27/2014
Ah! This was my worst idea ever! I shouldnt have finished this just before going to work. I'm a sobbing mess now!
But this was so beautiful and amazing. I'm gunna see if I can find the alternate ending!
| Kon13 chapter 7 . 3/27/2014
Wow... this chapter wad actually... PAINFUL for me..
| Kon13 chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
Ooooooh chiz! I was gunna go to sleep after this chapter, but heck no! Gotta know what happens!
| Shadow Chaser chapter 12 . 3/24/2014
That's probably one of my favorite Biblical stories and you transported it into the Marvel universe beautifully. There are no words for this except for how tragic, yet so poignant this is - lovely, lovely work as always.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/16/2014
I cried so much... and I still am... when I read this chapter. I was somewhat crying during the other chapters too, but during this one the most. I have now read all of your Thor and The Avengers fanfictions like "Syrgja", "And We Fall, And We Rise", etc, but this one is making me cry. Another reason that I was crying was because I was listening to some sad music from the soundtrack of "Ender's Game", but this fanfic is so sad, yet so beautiful, as most things are. I can only hope that you write another fanfic that takes place after "Thor: The Dark World" that features Thor finding out that Loki is still alive, and then the Avengers find out, and then Loki becomes a little brother to them all. And I have no idea why I'm about to write this, but maybe you could do a fanfic that also takes place after "Thor: The Dark World" that features Loki turning into a cat- you know, like a black cat w/ emerald green eyes- and have Thor and the Avengers take care of him until he shows himself as Loki to them, and there can be a brother reunion, Avenger... happiness, or whatever, I don't really know what to say, but I just think that you could maybe do something like this. OH! I have another idea! I'm really sorry about this, and you're probably not even going to read this, but maybe you could do a fanfic about Loki and Thor as children playing pranks, etc. And hopefully my last suggestion is doing something where Frigga is still alive, and Loki finds her or something, I don't really know. And this is DEFINITELY going to be my last suggestion, but you could do something where Loki is a child and have some Frigga-Loki mother-son family love or whatever. I know that you could probably do this, but you don't have to, and I'm not telling/ordering you to, but I think that this could be a wonderful opportunity for you (oh my god I sound like a school counselor; sorry XD). And if you do write any of these, I'd appreciate it if you dedicated whichever ideas/stories/fanfics you write to 5TailedLokiKitten, just because I think that would be awesome. And I'm an eighth grade soon-to-be-ninth grade girl, and I usually don't talk/write like this but since you are an awesome and magnificent writer, I am. Sooooo... just please please PLEASE think about writing one of these. Thank you, and write on (that was stupid, I'll admit it)! P.S. Please try to read this review and make one of these stories. And if you do, my last suggestion would be to make that fanfic into a multi-chapter instead of a one-shot, but long one-shots are okay too, like your "in her garden grew hyacinths" one-shot. If you do write one of these, I will try to review that fanfic and for you to know it's me, I will end my review w/ my name; 5TailedLokiKitten. So, for the (hopefully) last time, thank you and write on!
3, 5TailedLokiKitten (I hope you know that "3" is a heart). P.S.S. I also want you to write one of these because there are few others like these online. Bye! (I know, I know, I'm annoying ;)
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/11/2014
oh man i'm tearing up here! that was such a happy/sad ending:( poor thor and loki!
| Marvelruinedmyspirit chapter 12 . 3/11/2014
You owe me a full box of tissues.
Just kidding, although it really made me cry. I read the full story today, and I loved it :)
I'm so going to read the other version of it in AO3 right now.
See you there!
| xxxEvanesencexxx chapter 12 . 3/7/2014
This is by far the best story I've read. I have read both endings and i cried. I am amazed at the emotion behind it and how your portrayed the characters. I am still crying over the ending. Feels i got the feels for Loki and Thor.