|Reviews for Benefits|
| Kinshi chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Lovely fic. I never really imagined Mordy and Lillith being quite so tender though. _
I do hope to read more from you.
| BonusParts chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
While I like canonical Lilith/Roland, I can also see how Lilith/Mordecai can develop in an organic way, such as here. She almost doesn't need the excuse of Roland being with someone else, seeing as how they had such an awkward relationship anyway. (I always got the feeling she did love him, and he her, but neither one of them was ever any good at properly expressing those emotions to the point where a real relationship could develop.)
There are a few scattered instances of missing capitalization, most of them associated with dialogue. For the most part, it's solid, but bits like:
"Missed you." he kissed her forehead.
"Missed you." He kissed her forehead.
because his action is separate from his speech.
Other than that, this is smooth, and it's a nice callback to an earlier fleeting moment between them.
| 6127 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Oi I think this is actually the first time I've read any of your smutfics or whatever you wanna call it. Oh well keep up the good work.