Reviews for A-Flame |
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![]() ![]() Yay! You know what really bugs me? When people write a really good story and forget about it. Luckily, you don't do that! I forever await your next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() _Sooo can u just make a little tweak in that bewitching thing that it wears off and blair or kim cant help -_and she has to walk around as a girl being secretive btw great story soo far.i added it to my community _ SOUL AND MAKA |
![]() ![]() I know a good story when I see one, and it is often hard to reach my standards completely. But, you, Mint, have exceeded these standards. YOU AH WANDAHFUL! Correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar! I kind of have an OCD about grammar, kind of like Kid... Ah well. Please continue for your forever faithful follower (If I had an account, I would fave and follow)! |
![]() ![]() Pft, did you really have to point to the review button. And it really would be weird if Maka went out with a separate entity of her/him self. |
![]() ![]() I love the flavor mint... But that's beside the subject. Wonderful story! Yay story! Yay gender bent Maka! Yay yay yay! |
![]() ![]() Oh! And two more things, you're welcome, for reviewing and thanks for the virtual cookie Minty! XD |
![]() ![]() Sheesh, sure took you long enough! But, at the very least you got around to it. Anyway, yay! Maka-Chan is finally here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heheh, Kiddison... You could have tried harder naming him because I almost didn't take him seriously. However, Arthur was a good name for an older brother. Anyways, I'm thinking that this takes place in a parallel universe where some things change (Kid doesn't have the lines of Sanzu, his father is very OOC, and Maka turns out to be a guy). By the way, is she really a guy, or is she pretending to be one? And what is this Operation Deadlock? Sounds fishy to me. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() Me and all of my different personalities think it is cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWWAK. Sounds like chicken. This has a good plot so far (err... sampler thingy, that is). Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() So Maka is PRETENDING to be a boy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;P good work! Keep it coming, I'm interested to read more! |