Reviews for Downriver
heyarnoldfangirl chapter 1 . 8/17
i don't think sasuke is OC at all because we all know he tries to pretend to be an unfeeling ass but he's an incredibly passionate guy underneath (going on a revenge rampage surely is driven by passion). this is an incredibly sweet story. beautiful.
IgnitedSpirits chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Awww, this was so cute, though Sasuke was kind of OC, but that was what made this story incredibly beautiful.
Euni chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
This is so beautiful. I read this over 3 times over. Just gets me every time
itachi13080 chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
The ending makes you think of how much Sakura is rubbing off on Sasuke. :P Not to mention how cute and funny it was. ;)
You are right. It is more light hearted then your other stories. I like it for that though, cause of how you wrote it and the feelings it leaves the reader with. :)
Love this Oneshot! Your writing is enjoyable and refreshing. ;D
Your-Room-Is-A-Mess chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
This is an adorbs story. I love how you portrayed Sasuke, protective but not possessive. That's what I think of him, too. I loved the KakaSasu as well, what a pleasant sidedish to my beloved SasuSaku. It's not always that I see that and I love when I see it. I love their relationship.
White.Rose.Didi chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
I absolutely loved it!
ohsoblue chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Loved reading this story! I can actually imagine Sasuke doing that :')
LazyBass chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
So sweet it's almost sickening. ;)
Maraia Akatsuki chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
The beginning had me feeling absolutely giddy- smiling with fingertips pressing together in delight.

Your choice of words.
The humor.
Kakashi and Sasuke both being so shockingly in-character.

What a refreshing thrill!

And then it grows incredibly sweet as Sasuke arrives in Sakura's vicinity.

One of the most wonderful SasuxSaku reading experiences I've ever been fortunate enough to come across.

..Thank you. :')
Deathcomessoon chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
This should have much more reviews! :) It was very good and brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing :)
NorngPinky chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
OMG...this is so amazing and romantic, sweet, and humorous!

I had to chuckle at the beginning. I loved the humor there! Kakashi is a gem and I adore his and Sasuke's interaction! His cuing was nothing short of excellent!

Sakura and Sasuke's interaction...Mmmmm,...so sweet and loving! I really like how you portrayed their relationship and I can absolutely see that happening!

Again, this is amazing. And you are so awesome! Thank you for writing this great piece of work! I really enjoyed it! XD
xxxemiko.itooshixxx chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Beautiful :)
videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Aw, this was so adorable! Tbh, I think you got Sasuke's character right. Whenever he pursues something, he always pursues it passionately, and I think this would definitely apply for Sakura. I love all the humor throughout, especially Kakashi. Your descriptions of everything were just so good that I literally felt like I was right there in thw story the entire time and I could feel everything Sasuke was feeling. Yes, they were that good. Adding on to this, you got the environment really well, too.

You have exceptional writing abilities, honestly, and everyone was portrayed perfectly. Great job. :)
Nora57 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Loved it! So well-written, so smooth, and those dictions.. oh my.. I'm melting inside hehehe.. I adore your writing style :) thanks for the story!
Purveyor of Lost Socks chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
This is adorable. Not overly but just the right amount.
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