Reviews for Yellow
Child of Dreams chapter 44 . 11/13/2016
Uh yeah, murder is definitely a no-no!
Child of Dreams chapter 18 . 11/13/2016
Robinete Giry...
Meg's mother?
Child of Dreams chapter 11 . 11/13/2016
Um...do nine year olds even know what hormones are?
Child of Dreams chapter 9 . 11/13/2016
It's Valerius, not Valorous.
Child of Dreams chapter 6 . 3/5/2016
(frowns in confusion)
Black eyes?
I always thought Erik's eyes were yellow, like Penny's...
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
(snorts in derision)
I hardly think that a child born with yellow eyes is a sign of the Devil!
Red eyes, on the other hand...
Child of Dreams chapter 14 . 11/12/2015
(sighs happily)
Child of Dreams chapter 8 . 11/12/2015
(eyes grow wide)
Okay...what did Erik mean when he said that Zaza's vial was death and not a healing potion?
Child of Dreams chapter 7 . 11/12/2015
(eyes grow huge)
Um, what is going on with Erik?
He barely even knows Penny, and yet he already seems so protective of her...
Why?
Miss.CaitlinSophie chapter 44 . 5/6/2014
This has been quite possibly my favourite fanfic ever! It was so cute and a great plot!
Has quite a few continuity and spelling/grammar issues, however, that didn't hinder my enjoyment! Xx
Pineapple3000 chapter 4 . 1/1/2014
Ah-ha! In the last chapter, you said that Penny was ten when Madeleine was born, so Madeleine has to be six if Penny is sixteen!
The newbie phan chapter 44 . 12/23/2013
DUDE I WANT YOU TO SEND THIS TO A PUBLISHING COMPANY, GET FAMOUS OFF IT, AND I PROMISE I WILL BUY THE FIRST ONE AND I WILL BE AT YOUR FIRST BOOKSIGNING! THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME! Alright I admit I am sad that Raoul and Phillipe killed themselves, but ILOVE how you flawlessly sanded this into the woodwork of Parisian history. :D. FLAWLESS I TELL YOU FLAWLESS! Lol, I look forward to your next phic, trust me, I'll be there! XD
-your bestie,
TNP
( PS: Merry Christmas/Happy New year! :])
The newbie phan chapter 42 . 12/21/2013
WHOA... THAT... WAS... AWESOME...! Dude, you would be Erik's savior after Christine left. I love this chapter! The DRAMA of it all! Romance, mystery, edginess, and... CHILD BIRTH... Do that crazy old lady took her words to heart and tried to cease, eh? DAT CHICK IS KOOKOO! Lol! Please update soon!
-your bestie,
TNP
The newbie phan chapter 40 . 12/20/2013
That was the most theatrically beautiful chapter I have ever had the pleasure of laying eyes upon! OOOOH MYYYY GOOOOOD! GOOD LORD YOUZ IZ A GENIUZ! LolXD I wonder what Erik would do if he heard me say that... :3... LOLZ... Again, brilliant! I love it!
-your bestie,
TNP
The newbie phan chapter 39 . 12/18/2013
HOLY FREAKING CRAP! Is that a real procedure? WHOA... SCIENCY AWESOMENESSROMANTICALLY MYSTERIOUS PHANTOMMAH LIFE! XD XD XD! LOLZ! Dude, your writing... Is just so freaking beautiful, I could just die! Oh my god, I feel like I'm talking to a celebrity every time I review/PM you. :D. KEEP IT UP, DU STAEM!
-your bestie,
TNP
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