Reviews for Hot
Moonsway chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
This was hot! I like the voyeuristic thrill of it. The chance of being caught is very exciting. I hope you continue this with one of the girls catching him in the act. I think that you should list Daryl on the character description, because a lot of people search stories by characters. That's probably why it hasn't gotten the reviews it surely would have otherwise.