|Reviews for Pokemon - The Return to Hoenn|
| The Best Generic Author chapter 14 . 6/21/2017
ITS BEEN TWO YEARS PLEASE I BEG OF YOU CONTINUE THIS
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/23/2017
Update this story please it's been 2 years since last update
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/27/2016
It has been over a year!
I seriously believe he forgot or abandoned this story.
First death leaves now Xan. I am thoroughly disappointed.
| Pokemon fan chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
I enjoyed this story advance shipping is one of my favorites please update this story soon and add more chapters this story from what I can tell isn't even finished yet
| The Parliamentarian chapter 14 . 5/10/2015
Ni gives its support
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 14 . 3/24/2015
Glad to know you're still around. Had me worried. Lol. Good luck!
| SoulSilver8133 chapter 14 . 3/15/2015
Hey, well as it's nice to hear from you it's fine if you have to put your life before fanfiction but I do greatly look forward to reading anything you write. I will look forward to your other story too.
| Bulbreon chapter 13 . 2/9/2015
I realize that this is not done yet, but this has nothing to do with the summary... so yeah.
| SoulSilver8133 chapter 13 . 1/6/2015
I just want to say, for as much joking and fourth wall breaks this searies/series (I can't spell today) seems to have a good plot build up. (If it stays this good we can definetly start an underground cookie ring.)
Ps: The ammount of eevee for all chapters should be: OVER 900000 (Which is impossible unless you reaaally like Eevee)
| Reborn Dark Phoenix chapter 13 . 12/30/2014
Reborn shall suffice... Mr. Phoenix shall do as well, along with RDP, or Destroyer of Worlds.
Because of Phoenix...yeah-no?
*sigh* I'll just start
Well, being that it's the 30th of December at the time of this review and there haven't been any updates...I'm going to go out on a limb here and Chapter 25 ain't gonna come anytime soon. Still...you have 1 more day, you could prove me wrong.
Sheesh...you made Virgil a douchebag in this story...That was pretty hilarious. Will, though...can't say I blame him, that's more or less the same thing I said when I first heard of Fairy as a Type.
A lot of fluffy moments here, and nice references to real world movies and stuff. And your right, where the heck was Pikachu all this time? An those two unknowns at the end...hmmm, no idea whatsoever.
And I'm sorry to say, but ACTUALLY, being I'm still a new reviewer, I haven't been given or offered any cookies. I am immune to your mind games, now that you've revealed their true nature! *triumphant laugh* I now am the sole reviewer who has knowledge of these unimportant mistakes!
All in all, yet another great chapter, not a lot of action, but still great in terms of fluff and filler. Carry on my good sir...or ma'am...um...
Fellow human being! There you go.
| PearlxAdvance chapter 13 . 12/17/2014
Looking forward to the next one.
| Ruby097 chapter 13 . 12/15/2014
well what an interesting chapter! You know what your writing skills are such great that at whatever line you end it looks like a clifhangler. I can't wait for next chapter. Please update next chapter soon.
| MapTrapp999 chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
Will this story change to M rating?
| SupernalGodzilla chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
Aw! That's so beautiful the relation between Ah and May is going through the roof... It can't be contain it's... oh Dammit! (Advanceshipping Kawaii is over 9000!) *Mass Explosion*
P.s I think you have forgotten to write something under my name, all it is just.
| The Parliamentarian chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
Freddie Mercury Aproves...