Reviews for Rise of the Red Moon
Onyx2589 chapter 6 . 7/15
This is really, really rushed. I'm not entirely sure that's a bad thing yet.
Onyx2589 chapter 5 . 7/15
Poor Jordan. Get your head on straight ojou-sama!
Onyx2589 chapter 3 . 7/15
That was...rushed. Very rushed.
ULTRAMARINE59 chapter 17 . 11/25/2014
Great story. You ended it at the perfect spot. Great job.
WritersWorldwideLLC chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
The chapter is very well written. Very good all around character involvement...
Kudos to you, sir
Reclusive Dork chapter 15 . 9/1/2014
Hey. WHen is the actual LUKE going to come in?
Cyruss Singe chapter 12 . 5/30/2014
Really good chapter with the fight and the brothers fighting the Obsidian Archer. I like how you keep leaving little teaser trailer like ending at the end of each chapter, but that is because you are making it a five? I think, chapter long fight.

Keep it up and good luck
Cyruss Singe chapter 11 . 5/23/2014
A very well planned out fight scene with a nice moment for Feels but the ending was a little abrupt.

Keep it up and good luck
tomy98 chapter 11 . 5/23/2014
Ok now what, are they going to get kidnapt and held as hostiges or will they get killed at the spot. eather way something is bound to happen and its not going to be good foe dylan and jordan
tomy98 chapter 10 . 5/15/2014
Your brother is going to kick your ass if he reads that last part you know that. Any way what will happen if jordan loses
Cyruss Singe chapter 10 . 5/14/2014
Really good story so far can't wait to see what you've got coming next.

Keep it up
tomy98 chapter 9 . 4/9/2014
Hey you said you woudent do anymore walls of text, so why did you update a wall of then the wall the is good dylen is jelus, jordan might get a fiance, wait what about ichka dude do some story with him so you coud see that hes alive in your fanfic.
You fan tomy98
tomy98 chapter 8 . 3/24/2014
nice chapter and adding jordans brother good idea and what girl will he and up with,probebly laura right? anyway pleas dont do another wall of text pleas with suger on top.
tomy98 chapter 6 . 3/6/2014
Keep updateing and you fight scene was kind of confusing oh and make the chapters longer than that the story is good
Telron chapter 6 . 3/4/2014
interesting. was somewhat unexpected that Jordan's IS is a direct contender to Cecilia's blue tears. Also the fight was short but sweet because Jordan was finally able to tell what he wanted to say. I look forward to the next chapter with interest
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