Reviews for Bad End
MessyBargainer chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
lmao yes
FaustoCosgrove chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
The real bad end is that Naruto was written by someone as dumb as a potato.
Bored321 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Mizuki dying had me.
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
That was too good xD

Jelly and jam time.
Ferm chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
lol...dehyd xD
Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
it would be 3 days for them to die from dehydration...maybe less when combined with starvation.
Duesal Bladesinger chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
... I'm sensing a pattern here with the whole Apocalypse by dehydration thing. XD
Apocalyptica-sama chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Superb.

Last four words...so true.
A Sword Saint chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
What a downer. Theoretically, either Sarutobi, or Danzo, or both had ANBU keeping an eye on Naruto for his whole life (since he's a jinkurichi and thus a military asset) who originally in canon had orders never to reveal themselves unless Naruto's life was really about to end that moment. They would have stepped in if Mizuki went right for the kill like that, but would have let other ninja including Iruka die rather than betray their orders. It's a little darker of an interpretation of ninja life then canon, but so is your twist so they balance out.

The 'extremely specifically ordered ANBU guard' is a bit of a stretch, but one of the general rules of dramatic tension is to raise the competence level of everyone equally, so if Mizuki gets to develop true ruthlessness and a brain to use it then so do the anbu and the people commanding the anbu.

Of course this story was probably written as satire of the way the 'ninja' in the series behave, and is darkly humorous so good job with that,
sparrowhawk13 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Wow. I can actually see it happening this way.
fellow chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Epic.
S.R.457 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
10/10 LOVE IT! so much LOLZ!
Vallavarayan chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
lolz.
just… lola
treavellergirl chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Hmm, was there not another boy with some of the Kyuubi chakra sealed inside him by his father and some other people? And sub consequently afterwards left at some temple? Obito probably used him to get the required Kyuubi chakra to be able to resurrect the Juubi, at least that is the interpretation that would make any sense since when Naruto dies then that Kyuubi is dragged along as far as the impression of the information from the manga/anime ...
tyog56 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Lol!
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