|Reviews for Can't Sleep|
| lexieqrey chapter 51 . 10h
I simply loved it! thanks for sharing.
| LolaVerdigris chapter 23 . 7/25
Tickling idea was brilliant!
| LolaVerdigris chapter 11 . 7/24
Every chapter is so good! Your skill for writing flirtatious banter is masterful! I also love the innuendo filled conversations between Regina and Snow! So well done!
| LolaVerdigris chapter 2 . 7/23
I so enjoy how you take your time with the characters. I love slow romantic build up.
| LolaVerdigris chapter 1 . 7/23
What a wonderfully delicious first chapter!
| jm121212121 chapter 51 . 7/20
Wow now i not read many once story for regina and swan but out of the one i have read this one take the cake and makes better i love your nod towards the movies oliver and company ( if that who the orange cat and the dog with the banda where meant to be)and of couse to bolt. I like how it started it was a slow but not snail slow of a burn for the pairing by that i mean it not taking till the end of the story for them to figure out they like each other but at the same time it not a very fast pairing where it like chapter one oh they love eachother and know it and show it. It in the middle the goldilock zone for pairings. I liked how the story causes some very funny and touching moments but at the same time felt like for the most part this story could be an episode or at the most a season finale.i liked how henery sorta tricked spencer with the genie wish like from alldin agian nice nod to the old classics. I see when you where writing gold you went with the more family caring version like it the end of the neverland season where he kill himself to save every one instead of like in the latter season where hes still a power hungery dark one i kinda perfer your version. Now when it came to snow white i think i would shoot my own foot if my mother was like that she really should have just gave swan her space. Now as for the story it self i love the idea that when the barrier was broken at that spot it made it so wish could be made by childern or natrual magic user like regina to me that honestly a really cool idea for a story line and plot and on top of that spencer loan sharking and kidnapping so awesome of a story though i do not think spence as much of a douch bag he is would go after henry for three reasons one he is the family and only child of three of the greatest and most powerful magic user in story brooke, them being emma swan savior, regina mills the evil queen, and lastly mister gold aka the dark one. The second reason being his grand parent on his mother side are none other the snow white and prince charming who alone are a force to be reckoned with but could rally an army and lastly henrey is the most loved child in all of story brooke i mean he the reason the curse was broken taking him would put the town in a rampage for the most part not to mention but henry is the truest beliver wich could mean he has his own magic . But other then the logic fail by spencer this story was really good and kept me intrested though the whole thing i would love to see maybe a wedding one shot or more for the story verse but if not it had a good and happy ending though regina could have wished for i dont know may be a house for emma i mean cure her insomnia really even wishing for a barrier to protect storybrooke might have been better not to say that it was not funny that that was what she picked. Any way i like to know if my review helped or was any good alway looking for inout on stuff like that thanks for sharing such a great story.
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/17
Although i know this story is finished and unless you are still reading the reviews on old stories this is the equivalent of screaming into the night sky- if henry is old enough to look at porn and go on a date, hes old enough to make his own damn breakfast. this is in no way a criticism of your story which i a very much enjoying,
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/4
Re-reading this story for about the 5th or 6th time! I still love it as much as I did the first time I read it :) ps is the 6 letter word for wooden boat referenced in this chapter 'sampan' or maybe 'dinghy'?
| relentlessdreamer16 chapter 51 . 3/18
Great story. I had a lot of fun reading it
| WhereTheTreesHangTheFlowersDie chapter 25 . 2/19
I thought he was 13? You said in earlier chapters he was 13..not almost 12
| ecags chapter 51 . 1/8
I absolutely loooooved this story! So many moments of me squealing and jumping around the room, thank you for taking the time :)
| sherrieb77 chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Lovely story. Thanks for writing it! :D
| doveofpeace9910 chapter 51 . 12/1/2015
such an amazing story! loved this!
| millscully chapter 51 . 11/14/2015
Ohhhhh this was so sweet ! Thank you so so much for writing this story, it is truly amazing.
| millscully chapter 50 . 11/14/2015
Regina could have wished for anything, and she wished for Emma's insomnia to dissapear, that's love.