|Reviews for Marimo Sandwich|
| BrainDeadMaggot chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
I wonder if security can hunt you down at the airport for reading something like that while their public server.., I also wonder how many people read/watch porn in the airport.., "people are sick" says the pot..,
| ecklumi chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
OH GOD. This was hot!
yummie Zorosandwich with Sanjimeat P:
I love threesomes *q* *nosebleed*
level up: preSanji bonus
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Is this really an original plot you made by yourself? Because this is really similar to a One Piece ZoSan Dj I read a while back at myreadingmanga (just google: Mind Escape - We're making love at the age of 19 and 21). It was released in English by the scanlator group about a year ago, and your story is written after that which makes it look really suspicious, especially since the plot is so very similar. Basically the only difference is that in your story only Zoro travels in time. So, were you inspired by the doujinshi? If so it's polite to mention it in your story.
But if the impossible has happened and two people have come up with the exactly same plot by themselves, then never mind the above.
This story is hot, well written and I really enjoyed it. One thing though, you should put a "slight non-con" and "bleeding" warnings in the summary. I was expecting a lighter fic since this is categorized as "humor", but instead I got sex where the bottom is physically hurt and basically raped... so yeah, good story but please put warnings since this contains trigger subjects.
| asdfghjkl chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
thanks for the nosebleed
| MythologyGeekFreakMagicStar chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
I should be studying math.. but no instead of that I'm reading your story that's amazing by the way! I just loved it you're an amazing writer! I love you so much for writing this. Maybe if you have the time you could write a sequel were the older Sanji is sent to the younger Zoro's time and this time the Sanjis have fun with the marimo! Just suggestingof course :D
| bed of nails and sandpaper chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This is a good fic. I really enjoyed the idea and the start of it, but I have to say that I got a bit uncomfortable towards the end where some of it bordered on rape a bit. Maybe I'm just not into the same stuff. Well, either way, I mostly enjoyed it, so well done.
| Siri C-137 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Do what the byungwa-chan person said! This was so hot like not kidding! Moare please!
| moerdrgz chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Ugh dead...that's all I have to say! Thank you!
| byungwha-chan chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Wah...so moe...so HOT!
...you should write a part two...like what happens between Zoro and Sanji now that Zoro has returned to the past with his Sanji...and the how he shows his Sanji the things he learned from their future counterparts...yum...!
| krito1389 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Awesome loooved the idea ..great fic
| Labyrinth-chan chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
(0/0) Damn, i don't think i could sleep peacefully today,,,
haha good job, guys! Very interesting! Oh my, my pervert-ness has rises to another level (-,-)
| hesmus chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Oh hell yes! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! Ah, it was pleasure to help you when you created something like this. 3