|Reviews for The Shining Knight|
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/3
the ArKos Fluff in this chapter is overwhelming. I LOVE IT! :D
So uh..what's next?
| The Dream chapter 14 . 3/2
It's time to have Jaune do something immensely heroic that would forever carve his name in history, and also do some noble shit like "i'll let them all go, for their sake", but they all choose to be with him in the end anyway and officially become a true harem. All hands on deck, THE LEGENDARY HAREM FLEET SHALL CONQUER! ;_;7
| vstealthyx chapter 18 . 2/26
Hey this was very good, when do you expect we will be getting another chapter ?
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/19
crumble at the seams*
| PrOxMURDER chapter 18 . 2/5
Whilst I've seen this motif, theme, hmm what's the word. Ah, screw it. Whilst I've seen stories and shows that have this "One at a time" thing, it never ceases to make me laugh. Hopefully you'll get around to updating a tad in the future, judging by the last updated tag. Anyways, gr8 read m8, 8/8 Would play again." - Not IGN because I wish not to catch a charge for impersonations (If that's a thing).
| MoDulAte chapter 18 . 1/12
Beautifully written. Please continue. You have my support.
| Selias chapter 2 . 1/11
The paragraphs are a bit bulky.
| xdaath chapter 18 . 12/5/2014
reading this fanfiction is awesome i can't wait to read more
| ResamVi chapter 18 . 11/16/2014
This. Was. So. GOOD!
I have marathoned through this since I first stumbled upon it. And I liked every chapter so far of this. Many thanks for this beast of a story!
Keep up what you're doing because what you're doing is obviously pretty well done!
| Parker117 chapter 15 . 11/11/2014
This writing is excellent, by the way! I love it!
| AnonymousReading chapter 18 . 11/9/2014
This is truly one of the best romantic fanfics around, while it manages to stay lighthearted and humorous. Great job.
| AnonymousReading chapter 2 . 11/9/2014
Really needed some lighthearted stuff after a long piece of dramatic Bumblebee...
| SlugSLinger chapter 18 . 10/9/2014
This story is aweome. Really, I've read a ton of Jaune-with-a-harem to know what makes it good and what doesn't. So far, this fic is a breath of fresh air among so many, uh, unsucessful RWBY fics that I'm honestly glad for it. Now if only the chapters were a wee bit longer...
Also, I have a suggestion to make. Some people may not like the official pairing this fic may lead to. I myself am looking forward to a JaunexRuby pairing, but that's me. Anyway, instead of ending it with Jaune choosing one girl, why don't you write a few more chapters where Jaune ends up with other girls, with one girl per ending chapter?
For example, in one chapter he might end up with Phyrra. In another, he might end up with Yang.
Regardless of what you choose, I can only hope that you can continue writing and improve your skills further. Have fun and good luck!
| J.H.C chapter 18 . 10/7/2014
After reading this story, I am as interested in your story as to Blake with her books. How are you going to continue the story from here? I would think you could start the next date with either Ruby or Yang. All of this is comments and suggestions, I think for Ruby, you could have Jaune invite her to play at a somewhere exciting. For Yang, you could have her take the initiative and Jaune can plan it out from there. For Velvet, have Jaune and her be in the library or having lunch together. Lastly Weiss, another fancy dinner, maybe add a twist in it to add humor. I want to know if you have your opinion on who should Jaune choose or will there be a sort of a harem ending instead.
| LoveGlutton chapter 15 . 10/2/2014
Under what circumstance, Would old man ozzy be put in a scenario like that?