|Reviews for A Song of Manes and Antlers|
| iluvaqt chapter 33 . 10/13
I was very happy to read that Carella is Roland's full blood sister. And that most of the Lannister family love her and are protective of her. It does cause you to wonder if Robert had treated then equally if Joffery would have loved his brother instead of being jealous and threatened by him. His cruel and selfish steak is genetic though. His mother has it in her.
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/10
I find your fighting scenes drag on a bit too much and I ended up skipping to the ends of the battle just to get on with it. I'd suggest making them not quite so long
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 33 . 10/10
Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz
| Fiction Affliction chapter 33 . 10/9
It was really good! But, the grammatical errors kept nagging at me, take it from me, proofing your story does wonders.
| explodingbunnies52 chapter 33 . 10/9
| Darkcush chapter 4 . 10/9
Absolutely massive dog lol.
Great chapter tho.
| Hektols chapter 33 . 10/9
I don't think that the Greyjoys will join the Lannister forces, at least not while Balon is in charge.
It will be great if Tyrion finds out about Baelish business in his new charge.
Good work with the double meaning about Joffrey's crossbow, specially when interacting with Margaery. I wonder if he will enforce that idea to hunt and punish homosexuals, specially if he tries to apply with Loras.
| Master of Dragons God chapter 33 . 10/9
| Silver crow chapter 33 . 10/9
Okay starting off the only bad thing I've got to say about this chapter is you got a few names mispelled but it didn't ruin everything
Despite the fact we didn't get any Roland this was a pretty good chapter from the point of view of the king shit himself and the sea rats
Thought I am wondering how quickly will the Tyrells notice what a huge fuck up they've made by joining Joffrey and how they are going to appease Roland so they still have a place in his Kingdom because while arguably beside the royal family they are the most powerful house thanks to the land they govern thought in all fairness the power of the reach depends on how good the weather is if you ask me but as I was saying they also have a lot of powerful banner men such as the Hightowers, Rowans, Tarlys and Redwynes who all have a small claim on their castle which Roland can give to them if the Tyrells aren't on his side when the dust settles
As for the Lannisters trying to allie with the Greyjoys I hope you have that attempt to be a futile one because Balon Greyjoy is a stubborn miserable old shit who wouldn't Allie with the "crown" because unless the Lannisters invade the islands and destroy the iron fleet he won't bend the knee to them and then if he does the iron born would be useless allies as they've got nothing
Another thing is I don't think Balon would ever give up his crown to serve the Lannisters regardless of how much Roland has humiliated him because I don't think the iron born would ever obey the King who kneel twice and the Lannisters can't get an alliance with them by promising them independence because if they do that then all the other high lords will demand the same thing because if the iron born can get it why not them
Also I'm suprised that Asha isn't already thinking that the iron born war is fucked and her best chance of gaining power over the Isles ahead of Theon and his uncles is to take her supporters and join Roland as long as he names her Lady Paramount of the Iron isles on the condition she continues the work of her grandfather by making the Iron born into traders and maybe explores so basically not the scum of Westros also I'm suprised again that Theon isn't thinking the same thing thought I guess he'd be lucky is Roland didn't hand him over to the Starks thinking about it that could be a twisted way for Asha to show her loyalty to Roland by handing her brother over to them
As for there plan for Barrowtown eh I don't see it going well I mean yeah Theons good at sieging castles in the North thanks to Ned dragging him to everyone of them at some point when he was a ward but unlike Winterfell or the Dread for the doesn't know the intimate details of Barrowtown but even if they do take the town I see the iron born sustaining heavy loses
Now the last thing I'm curious about is what are you going to do with Dany are you going to make her see that Roland is what's best for westros seeing as how he knows the place or are you going to make her the insane self righteous Dany who thinks she knows best for Westros despite the fact she's never actually been to westros proper
Anyway hope you update soon
| Laura201112 chapter 33 . 10/9
| birdy chapter 33 . 10/8
please update as soon as you can this was a great chapter please update as soon as you can
| HoosierCullen chapter 33 . 10/8
A chapter filled with fools that are the opposition to Roland. Should be interesting to see if their plans will come to fruition or if they will fail miserably. I do hope that you have Littlefinger failing miserably as well with his plots in using the Vale as his puppet army. I think that Roland would make good on keeping that happening. Should be interesting indeed.
| sketchywolf chapter 33 . 10/8
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/8
| GLCW2 chapter 33 . 10/8
Wow, you really should at least read over your chapters before posting. There are a lot of errors. That being said, I can't wait to see what Roland will do next.