im really sad he didnt die again

You could have put this as a header or footer in your next chapter instead of wasting peoples time thinking that this is a new chapter.

Great chapter on a song of makes and antlers, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

God I tried to like this story so much, the idea is good and the plot is intriguing, but I'm stopping at chapter 20 just because of how much of an insufferable, self-righteous, condescending cunt Roland is. I just can't stand him.

Also, there's a fine line between making a character intelligent and making him omniscient. This guy knows things that he possibly cant know. I.e. suspecting Varys has something to do with the Targs. He's a damn demi-god, he knows everything and has a solution for everything.

And everything just goes too perfectly. You're telling me he took out 2 kingsguard with a fire poker, then ran around the castle injured, freeing 3 other hostages? At least Eddard should have been left behind, making for a more believable and interesting tale.

Word of advice, every character should have flaws, and a story where everything goes perfect for the "good guys" is a boring story.

But it's honestly still a pretty decent story, I just wish Roland wasn't so damn unlikable. Maybe I'll come back to it.

Wtf, why is Roland suddenly beating up Lancel? His character is inconsistent as fuck. Also, I don't even want to know what's going on with Joffrey. He's either suddenly become some weird SI or this is the shittiest redemption I've ever seen. Yeah, I'm done here.

This is probably the worst chapter so far. Roland really shouldn't have any emotional investment with Gregore Clegane. At this point everything he knows about him should be only rumors and hearsay (not that it isn't true). Honestly he should be more furious with Sandor for killing Mycah. It clearly defines that this is a fix fic with our speshul OC solving all the fan-focused problems of westeros. Still going to read on to hopefully be proven wrong.

You are like, constantly putting quotes where they shouldn't be. Get someone to read your work.

All I can say is thank you, thank you, thank you, and please update soon!

nice work!

Awesomeness. Happy New Year

greet story

Great chapter a song of makes and antlers, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

Oh please, i'm pretty sure the Cersei was all too willing to spread her legs to Robert if that meant she could be queen. So you can't really say she had been forced to marry him and live a life she did not choose since she was aware that Robert was head over heels in love with Lyanna, and that she has always wanted power for herself so that really just made her all too willing to be in a marriage with him if it meant getting what she most desired.

It just seems like Roland is changing too much for me to keep reading. Dude is way different than what he was doing 10 chapters ago.

Great story, looking forward to the next update!