Reviews for A Song of Manes and Antlers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you left Joffrey alive, i really hope there's a stand-off between him and Roland in some way. Also, I'm glad to see an insight to Blackfish and Ned's view of Roland and his ruling- I'm sure Ned would become more agreeable to wiping out the Ironborn now that they've taken his wife. Speaking of, was it implied that Euron took Catlyn as a SaltWife? I also wondered why Roland and Sansa couldn't marry first but I'm glad you explained it was because of her age. And I beg of you to let Roland stay King, I'm seeing so many fanfics of Daenerys coming to Westeros and the OC gives of the throne for her. Honestly she wasn't my favorite character of the tv series (I have yet to read the books). And this twist of Euron having a horn that can control them is soooooo interesting, I really look forward to seeing where you go with that. Hoping to see more Roland/Sansa moments as well as just Baratheon/ Stark bonding |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im pretty sure margery by definition is a virgin. As in no man has penetrated her. But there are other ways of pleasure without going that far. Such has hands and tongues, objects whether by boy or girl or self. She might have lost her maiden head by horse riding or some other form of extenrious such as self gratification. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why he would think that. Can Joffrey be any more delusional? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so Joffrey will live, at least until Marg has delivered an healhy son; from that point on he is no more needed. Even if he seems a bit more sane than canon, maybe because the ugly feeling of his brother being better then him gas somehow driven him to be better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed you changed your story from being a Game of Thrones fanfiction to A Song Of Ice And Fire fanfiction. D&D are good at adapting, not creating new content. I'm just considering Season 6 and below canon with the major points of Season 7 and 8 canon as well. Like Dany going mad and etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So no strangler? Does make sense since Roland would become king if Joffrey died without an heir(if the truth isn’t counted), and the Tyrell’s would lose what they gained from the crown. Though olenna would most likely be worried about margaery because of joff, while Cersei most likely will have a problem with Margaery since she is now queen while she queen mother with less power. |
![]() ![]() Glad to see an update Despite Joffreys training and fancy new swords I still hope Roland destroys him in their duel after all Roland is more talented, stronger, faster, smarter and he’s been fighting a hell of a lot more than Joffrey has so he’s got way more experience in a actual battle Not going to lie I was hoping Joffrey would just be a all round disappointment to Margaery at the end their but kinda typical of him thinking how he’s one up Roland Still waiting for the day when Roland brings Joffreys world crashing down around him Hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() Great chapter on a song of manes and anlters, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please |
![]() ![]() ![]() how does he win |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven’t been getting email hates for this fanfic so I’ve missed out on a few chapters but great to see the new ones :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL -I don't know what he thinks he "wins" marrying that scheming, backstabbing, Tyrell trollop. One question -WHY would Robert have cloaked Cersei in the Lannister family cloak? Wouldn't it have been BARATHEON? And given the twincest rumors, shouldn't they be making more of an effort to show JOFFREY as a Baratheon instead of a pure Lannister? Arya's thoughts on Margaery shows me she's not much of a judge of character...she's a better liar and schemer than Sansa, but I highly doubt ol' Marge could ever be a better queen. One thing about it, though, she's willing to do ANYTHING to get her hands on a crown. Thanks for the new chapter! |
![]() ![]() You forgot "Married to Selyse Florent" |
![]() ![]() ![]() [She looked up at Jaime in surprise and saw he too was looking at the babe's hair with confusion. 'This is Robert's son!' she realised and felt her shock fading and anger taking its place. How could this have happened, Cersei wondered in horror, 'I was so careful...this should be Jaime's child.'] Would Cersei really say this out loud with Pycelle right there? Cersei admitting that she thought she was careful with avoiding giving birth to one of Robert's children is leagues better than her deciding to bear one for contrived reasons. It's just that the whole scene could've been cut out. I mean, the fact that Roland is trueborn could've been done with an obvious description and maybe Cersei's growing worry that hey, Roland is becoming too much like his father in all the wrong ways. I'm just saying this as a way to maybe keep the intention of the opening scene because if you're going to fast forward in the same chapter, you have a problem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought Theon's sister was named Yara Greyjoy? |