Reviews for Chained heart
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26
I really want to read this, but i can not get over the fact that you use - this as dialog puntuation. - is not ment to be used in dialog. I have seen quite a few people do that and i always wondered why. Are they too lazy to give the effort? Who in their right mind told people this is okay?!
gothicprincess982 chapter 30 . 7/25
I love this story bt make gaara to be more accepted in the idea that tht it msy br good to have a new famliy merber in this story just a thought.
funnylittlestory chapter 30 . 5/29
Lovely as always
idea.getthe chapter 30 . 5/28
The update is been long thus have or reread the whole story to... Refresh my memory to review it properly...
Well, this chapter was... Going around in circle...snort of like 2 couple pushing something between each other...
Claire chapter 1 . 5/17
Well, the story and the writing seems good, but I can't keep reading because of your fear of quotation marks. Seriously, these - are not meant to be used to mark dialogue.
funnylittlestory chapter 29 . 2/24
I love the name Nao it's cute
To'M'L Kuran chapter 29 . 2/16
funnylittlestory chapter 28 . 1/22
That was another great chapter I'm happy Ai gets to work with children. And thanks for the anal even though you were not fond of it :). Keep up the great work
idea.getthe chapter 28 . 1/21
It is nice but the drama push and pull got to stop... It's getting old and boring...
The drama need a fresh approach...
Miko Hayashi chapter 28 . 1/20
I think a miracle child for Gaara and Ai should be a thing. Make it happen.
To'M'L Kuran chapter 28 . 1/20
Oooh I love the touch with the kids at the hospital. I feel like this could lead to an adoption :)
Guest chapter 27 . 12/26/2014
The Pull out Method is mostly a Myth.i. does work all of the time
Guest chapter 11 . 12/26/2014
So you are maling anyguy that like ai a Rapist to make gaara look like a saint...
Guest chapter 10 . 12/26/2014
Tailed Beasts are not Demons. They are simmply beings made up of Potent Chakra
Guest chapter 9 . 12/26/2014
gaara fangirl. Let see how forgiving you are after You are beaten and raped... and then carry a misscarage..and then finally your so-called angel finally apologize. ... Really?
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